Claim: Even though young people often receive the advice to “follow your dreams,” more emphasis should be placed on picking worthy goals.
Reason: Many people’s dreams are inherently selfish.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim AND the reason on which that claim is based.
Most young people are always encouraged to follow their dreams, take risks and try out their ideas. While this approach is good for their progress and they are motivated by themselves to work hard and achieve their dreams, the decisions which young people take may or may not always be the best.
The author states that young people should keep more emphasis on worthy goals than their dreams as their dreams might be selfish. While this might be true to some extent for some people or professions, the vast majority of the people usually don't necessarily have selfish dreams. Most people would believe in the success of the world as a whole and not just themselves and hence their dreams cannot necessarily be regarded as selfish. Still there could be a few reasons why it would be better for young people to chase worthy goals than the dreams they have.
Young people inherently lack experience of the real world and this could be a great hindrance for them to achieve the dreams they saw for themselves when they were young. Aged and more experienced people can in some cases help them out to set them in the right direction towards their dreams.
The dreams of young people may or may not be really worthy chasing them. For example, young kids may just start to love a particular profession on first sight and set their dreams on achieving that. However, it may turn out that most people choose that profession or job out of compulsion than liking and hence it is not actually worthy to chase such a dream.
The dreams of young kids in todays technology world may or may not be realistic to chase considering the the background and the way they are brought up. Young people might get influenced by any small thing they get to see on television or read about it on the Internet and would set their dreams to achieve the same. This would definitely be a wrong approach for their overall progress and it would definitely be more worthy to pick more thoughtful worthy goals over such unrealistic dreams.
Thus in general young people are told to follow their dreams which is great for their progress in life. However setting more worthy smaller goals leading towards that dreams could be more beneficial since the emphasis comes on the journey towards their dreams than just keeping result goals and be set on achieving them regardless of the situation and the price for it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...the vast majority of the people usually dont necessarily have selfish dreams. Most p...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...not necessarily be regarded as selfish. Still there could be a few reasons why it wou...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...y not be realistic to chase considering the the background and the way they are brought...
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Line 9, column 102, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...y not be realistic to chase considering the the background and the way they are brought...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... goals over such unrealistic dreams. Thus in general young people are told to fol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, hence, however, if, may, really, so, still, thus, while, for example, in general, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 418.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71770334928 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26922419525 2.79657885939 81% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.413875598086 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.59117977528 82% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2389798099 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.25 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.125 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244174039732 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110919501939 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451105863308 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152836264787 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441776902028 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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