Claim: Even though young people often receive the advice to “follow your dreams,” more emphasis should be placed on picking worthy goals.
Reason: Many people’s dreams are inherently selfish.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim AND the reason on which that claim is based.
The issue states that people should give more stress to pursue worthy goals rather than following their dreams as they are generally complacent. I somewhat agree with the claim do not agree with the reason. it is fair enough to contend that many a times, dreams are surreal and unachievable . having said that, one can also not deny the fact that definition of the so called "worthy goals", is often equivocal.even, claiming that the dreams are often selfish is also not correct. There should always be tradeoff between one's dreams and achievable goals in order to be successful.
generally, dreams act as galvanising agents in one's life to achieve arduous task but one should also take a note of the fact that pursuing non realistic dreams can often be pernicious and one's inability to achieve those may exacerbate anxiety and even be a cause of depression. Going by the famous words of Dr. A.P.J Abdul Kalam, "young mind should always dream big, failing to do so will be great injustice to the nation", which stresses on the importance of pursuing high goals. people generally requires a reaason to work hard and having such leucrative dreams bolsters the determination to pursue them and on the way, they can achieve many goals which they had not thought of before. even, seminial work in every field-be it sciences, social sciences, arts or philosophy-was only possible because of benchmark goals of their respective personalities.
However, the reason given in the statement to prove the ineffectiveness of following one's dream is not agreeable. According to me, every dreams are selfish. Human beings are cognitive creatures who are in the pursuit of the purpose of their life. they alw
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 283.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06360424028 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82021591971 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583038869258 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.5742154465 60.3974514979 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.416666667 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287116695488 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902997113191 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652755327764 0.0758088955206 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190875859195 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722545464661 0.0667264976115 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.