Claim: Even though young people often receive the advice to “follow your dreams,” more emphasis should be placed on picking worthy goals.
Reason: Many people’s dreams are inherently selfish.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim AND the reason on which that claim is based.
The dreams which we saw with our open eyes, define the direction of our efforts and energies in our lives. Blindly following a destination does not mean it will worth something good for ourselves or for the overall society. A person should put more thought into the target before starting the journey in that direction because eventually, ends matters a lot.
Most of the time, people have dreams which are limited just to their self and they are less related to the betterment of society. This approach towards life causes many social and personal problems sometimes, like depression or disappointment etc. The reason is, humans are social animals and we are related to each other. We seek help from each other when we feel alone and afraid.
Another benefit of focusing on choosing worthy goals is the journey attached with those goals, if a person has some purposeful goal, he or she will get so much help from mental peace, inner satisfaction and appreciation from society while trying to achieve those goals. People always have a positive attitude towards positive things. Those who have common positive and welfare destinations tend to help each other more than those who are self-centered.
Other than having a selfish dream, it is in the human psyche that we do better on tasks that match with our interests and personalities So it is really important to choose a job/profession that we end up enjoy working with. People who blindly follow their dreams without focusing on the end results end up with living a purposeless life.
In conclusion, having a dream in our lives is important, but having a meaningful way and destination is more important than that dream. Young generation should be guided in the right direction, not just in any direction that they fell charming and will make them famous and wealthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 308.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92857142857 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61406990032 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587662337662 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9576831642 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.428571429 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119221027279 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419462058662 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026870683202 0.0758088955206 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066467589159 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0105820201742 0.0667264976115 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.