Culture composes a legacy of a nation, which breeds characters and perceptions of every individual generations by generations. Culture can generate traditions as the time passes by. Culture traditions can be reckoned as a hallmark of a country and international face left in the memories of other countries’ people. The culture traditions in a nation primarily leave in countryside, therefore, government should ensure consistent financial aids for preservation and development of the cultural traditions in rural areas. Major cities should be aided financially because of their governmental function instead of protecting a nation’s culture tradition.
Culture traditions are mainly kept in countryside rather than major cities. Taking a look at a major city, it reminds people of skyscrapers, financial headquarters with hustle and bustle of every corners with iron-faced commuters. Most major cities are in the same situation. Because economic progress has decolored indigenous traits, culture traditions are almost replaced by cosmopolitan metropolises. In the contrary, rural areas still developed so slowly that most traditions can still be alive in lives of people in countryside. For example, Amish people is the unique tribes with religious belief who are untouched to all convenience in modern today. They do not use electric lights and reject to consumerism and materialism, no driving cars and using cellphone. They just plant for survival. This lifestyle cannot be believable in the eyes of people in cities, let alone in major cities. Therefore, this traditional culture should be maintained by government because they have no incomes. Therefore, governmental aids are being achieved by endorsement and publicity of their lifestyles, projecting tourism to attract more tourists for higher incomes for local Amish people.
Besides, some handcraft techniques still remain in rural areas, therefore, government should give a hand to preserve the tradition as the national treasure. For example, Chinese embroidery is the typical crafts generated thousands of years former in rural areas of Jiangsu Province. This derivation and preservation still be in the rural areas till now. The Government are emphasizing on the propaganda and publicity to show their regional manifestation compared with other places. The financial support includes releasing advertisement in subway, internet and TV, which has enlarged the popularity and recognition.
Although big cities still exist a lot of a national heritage such as emperor castles or traditional art, they constitute a small portion in all traditional culture of a nation. Therefore, National financial assistance should be offered to the rural areas. Even if governments should help major cities, it is not because of existence of national traditional culture, but because of enhancement of infrastructure such as maintenance of museums and galleries, government office such as The White House, the operation of public schools, raising civil servants, and so on.
Therefore, a nation’s cultural traditions are in rural areas such as the age-old lifestyles and handcrafts, consequently, national aid are surely necessary to preserve the heritage of legacies passed generations by generations. Government should assist major cities because infrastructure needs to be cared about instead of preservation of cultural tradition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, if, look, so, still, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2907.0 2235.4752809 130% => OK
No of words: 504.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76785714286 5.05705443957 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73813722054 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20120242963 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515873015873 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 927.9 704.065955056 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.9460313794 60.3974514979 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.807692308 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317792212455 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924389737772 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738071458769 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204603337792 0.150359130593 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692983005061 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 48.8420337079 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.1639044944 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 167.0 100.480337079 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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