Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.

Culture composes a legacy of a nation, which breeds characters and perceptions of every individual generations by generations. Culture can generate traditions as the time passes by. Culture traditions can be reckoned as a hallmark of a country and international face left in the memories of other countries’ people. The culture traditions in a nation primarily leave in countryside, therefore, governments should ensure consistent financial aids for preservation and development of the cultural traditions in rural areas. Major cities should be aided financially because of their governmental function instead of protecting a nation’s culture traditions.

Culture traditions are mainly kept in countryside rather than major cities. Taking a look at a major city, it reminds people of skyscrapers, financial headquarters with the hustle and bustle of every corner with iron-faced commuters. Most major cities are in the same situation. Because economic progress has decolored indigenous traits, culture traditions are almost replaced by cosmopolitan metropolises. In the contrary, rural areas still developed so slowly that most traditions can still be alive in lives of people in countryside. For example, Amish people is the unique tribe with religious belief who are untouched to all convenience in modern today. They do not use electric lights and reject to consumerism and materialism, no driving cars and using cellphone, but plant for own survival in the long lifetime. This lifestyle is unbelievable in the eyes of people in cities, let alone in major cities. Therefore, this traditional culture should be maintained by government because they have not served people and had no incomes. Therefore, governmental aids are being achieved by endorsement and publicity of their lifestyles, projecting tourism to attract more tourists for higher incomes for local Amish people. Thanks to tourism prosperity governments initiated, they can maintain more affluent level than ever.

Besides, some handcraft techniques still remain in rural areas, therefore, governments should offer a hand to preserve the tradition as a substantial national treasure. For descendants to hand in and pass on the workmanship, this mission will load on the government’s shoulder. For example, Chinese embroidery is the typical crafts generated during the past thousands of years in rural areas of Jiangsu Province. The preservation still be in the rural areas till now. The local Governments are emphasizing on the propaganda and publicity to show their special regional manifestation compared with other places. The financial support includes releasing advertisement in major cities’ subway, internet and TV, which has enlarged the popularity and recognition in rural districts of Suzhou and Hangzhou embroidery derived. Exhibits all over the country are held with the cooperation of local governments and other cities’ governments.

Although big cities still exist a lot of a national heritage such as emperor castles or traditional art such as musical plays from the Broadway or Peking opera of Beijing, they constitute a small portion in all traditional culture of a nation. Therefore, National financial assistance should be offered to the rural areas where there exist diverse alive traditional cultures. Certainly, governments should sponsor major cities, it is not because of existence of national traditional culture, but because of enhancement of infrastructure such as maintenance of museums and galleries, governmental affairs, the operation of public schools, raising civil servants, and so on, consolidating international face in front of other countries’ people.

Therefore, a nation’s cultural traditions are in rural areas such as the age-old lifestyles and handcrafts, consequently, national aids are surely necessary to preserve the heritages with history of hundreds or thousands of years. Governments should assist major cities, as the representative of a nation, because infrastructure needs to be improved instead of preservation of cultural tradition.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...erate traditions as the time passes by. Culture traditions can be reckoned as a hallmar...
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Line 5, column 617, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nifestation compared with other places. The financial support includes releasing ad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, if, look, so, still, therefore, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 84.0 58.6224719101 143% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3499.0 2235.4752809 157% => OK
No of words: 605.0 442.535393258 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78347107438 5.05705443957 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95951083803 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27532829273 2.79657885939 117% => OK
Unique words: 302.0 215.323595506 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.499173553719 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 1103.4 704.065955056 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6608866892 60.3974514979 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.964285714 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6071428571 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
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Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324789254839 0.243740707755 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928588752889 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674968614727 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209249698938 0.150359130593 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533155472964 0.0667264976115 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 48.8420337079 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.1639044944 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 197.0 100.480337079 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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