In his claim, the author maintains that government must ensure that major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive. I firmly agree with author's position as it is the cities where all the financial, economic and political decisions are made. However the reason asserted by author that it is the cities that preserve a nation’s cultural and traditional values is not true.
If we assume a nation as a train then cities are engines of it. Hence it of prime to maintain a steady supply of fuel (financial support) keeps it moving. Cities are gears of clockwork that working together for the development of a country and hence are the driving force of a nation’s prosperity. With lack of funds, there would be less jobs, less infrastructural improvements, less purchasing power of an individual and thus will create an atmosphere of hopelessness. This will seriously impact the economy of the city and will impact social and economic performance indicators of the country.
However, cities, though being the center-points of country's economy, they do not provide reflection of a country's culture. They are not the center of tradition and values of a nation. It is the small town and villages where true soul of the country resides. With people striving and running an endless race to excel in cities, they do not have much time to focus on culture and tradition. It is the people in rural areas who are more relaxed and are more sentimental towards religious beliefs. They celebrate each festival with equal joy and help in preserving our traditions.
To help keep the traditions alive, government should provide much needed financial support to small tows/villages of the country. It is in small town and villages where one can find true reflection of the characteristics of a society.
Hence the government should ensure steady funding of its major cities but also holds responsibility to provide much needed resources to uplift its small town and villages. By doing this it will be able to preserve the nation’s cultural and traditional values and progress towards development.
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Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Suggestion: fewer
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.251928020566 0.240241500013 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.151670951157 0.157235817809 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107969151671 0.0880659088768 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0385604113111 0.0497285424764 78% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0514138817481 0.0444667217837 116% => OK
Prepositions: 0.107969151671 0.12292977631 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0334190231362 0.0406280797675 82% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.90699505917 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0231362467866 0.030933414821 75% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0925449871465 0.0997080785238 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0231362467866 0.0249443105267 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.012853470437 0.0148568991511 87% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2127.0 2732.02544248 78% => OK
No of words: 349.0 452.878318584 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.09455587393 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.378223495702 0.366273622748 103% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.275071633238 0.280924506359 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.19770773639 0.200843997647 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.126074498567 0.132149295362 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90699505917 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 219.290929204 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512893982808 0.48968727796 105% => OK
Word variations: 54.2191423559 55.4138127331 98% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.3888888889 23.380412469 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.228734974 59.4972553346 54% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.166666667 141.124799967 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 23.380412469 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.674092028746 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 46.8960522127 51.4728631049 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.62765957447 1.64882698954 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409268481856 0.391690518653 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121403344391 0.123202303941 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0601116378914 0.077325440228 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.566055023216 0.547984918172 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.113723704891 0.149214159877 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169446876083 0.161403998019 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1169380867 0.0892212321368 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.346103645341 0.385218514788 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0681503299433 0.0692045440612 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281071599455 0.275328986314 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152732363544 0.0653680567796 234% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.