Claim: Imagination is a more valuable asset than experience.
Reason: People who lack experience are free to imagine what is possible without the constraints of established habits and attitudes.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
I disagree with the claim as, although imagination can sometimes convince our brain to believe and assimilate certain things which may sometimes be impossible for us to experience firsthand, it leaves a lower impact on our brain in the long term. When we experience something, it leaves a bigger impact on our life and can even be life-changing. However, the impact of imagination is short-lived and less pronounced in our lives. It is true that due to established habits and constraints, the quality and quantity of experiences can be hampered, but in order for an experience to be impactful it doesn't necessarily have to be extreme. Going out of our comfort zone and experiencing things that are even remotely close to our wild imagination can sometimes be more impactful than just imagining things.
Imagination can be a precursor to an experience but imagination alone cannot have a big enough impact on our lives. Imagination gives us motivation and unique ideas to indulge in various experiences and activities. For example- people can imagine going on a world tour, which is quite unachievable for most, however, it gives us a general idea that we want to travel and get to see different things and indulge in different cultures. So the closest thing we can do to give life to our imagination is to go to some tourist spot that is near our location. Sure, it may not be as grand as going on a world tour but it will scratch the ick enough to be memorable and something to cherish.
Another example can be given from an academic point of view, like, a student may imagine being the topper of the class, however, to turn that imagination into an experience, the student will have to work hard and and persevere. This further proves the point imagination acts more so as a precursor to experience rather than a substitute let alone a more valuable one. The imagination of being a topper pushed the student to step out of his comfort zone and achieve what he/she desired.
Hence, the claim that imagination is a more valuable asset than experience is not true. Imagination alone does not bring anything fruitful until some efforts are put into it to experience it. The experience of certain things also comes with interesting stories and moments which leave an impact on our lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 597, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...er for an experience to be impactful it doesnt necessarily have to be extreme. Going o...
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Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...nce, the student will have to work hard and and persevere. This further proves the poin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, as to, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 394.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82233502538 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84048594995 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464467005076 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 625.5 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7480374024 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.75 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227830530837 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101416656471 0.0831039109588 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074745726961 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172037304113 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542195255804 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.