Claim: It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Reason: The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
This topic raises the claim that it is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man and woman as hero. The reputation of anyone subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished. Indisputably, the era of fast changing things that we currently are in makes no guarantee that someone or something will remain in the limelight for long. Whatever makes you subjected to media scrutiny will fade faster than it comes. Nevertheless, it is important that we have figures that can stand out as representing the righteous, the good and who we feel could be an agent of change. this represent the idea that we are not alone. thus, I agree with the claim for the following reasons.
First of all, we are in an age where we are overwhelmed by numerous information everyday. Consider the celerity at which technology advancements are researched daily. I would like to point out that, a particular company might discover the best way to communicate with people in a certain region and before long another company had taken the invention and converted it to something bigger which would most definitely puts the new company in the face of the public thus making the first company never existed. To demonstrate, the case of the internet created by the US government but today it is not known because a lot of other firms have built many new things on the internet and the heroes of internet are nowhere to be found. They serve as the regulatory body rather than still wallowing in the position of being the internet hero.
Furthermore, no information is meant to stay in the public domain forever. Someday, such informatoon would be buried deep in libraries and only with conscious effort could such information be found. For instance, the case of corruption in the Federation of International Football by the ex-President Sepp Blatter is no more an interesting news in the media. it would even take a while for someone to remember who Sepp Blatter was.
On the whole, these example of incidents that have had few minutes in the public domain are the reasons why I believe anyone subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ho we feel could be an agent of change. this represent the idea that we are not alon...
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Suggestion: Thus
...present the idea that we are not alone. thus, I agree with the claim for the follow...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt the idea that we are not alone. thus, I agree with the claim for the following...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...are overwhelmed by numerous information everyday. Consider the celerity at which technol...
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Suggestion:
...uld be buried deep in libraries and only with conscious effort could such informa...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'interesting news'.
Suggestion: interesting news
...he ex-President Sepp Blatter is no more an interesting news in the media. it would even take a whil...
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Suggestion: It
... more an interesting news in the media. it would even take a while for someone to ...
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Suggestion:
... that have had few minutes in the public domain are the reasons why I believe any...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, nevertheless, so, still, thus, while, for instance, first of all, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 368.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85054347826 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75385186288 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540760869565 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.0822906322 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6470588235 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 5.21951772744 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311041257086 0.243740707755 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095136858737 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103556391328 0.0758088955206 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171979166865 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117848598393 0.0667264976115 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.