claim It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero Reason The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished Specific Task Instruction Write a response in which you discuss the e

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...ciety where media coverage is ubiquitous,there is a claim that no living man or woman ...
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...ntually be diminished by media scrutiny.In my opinion,it is undeniable that media ...
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...minished by media scrutiny.In my opinion,it is undeniable that media coverage somet...
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... sometimes expose wrong things of heroes,deteriorating their reputation;however,such exposure ...
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...s,deteriorating their reputation;however,such exposure do not necessary mean a hero’s...
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...an a hero’s positive image will collapse,society may still regard them as heroes. In ...
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...ety may still regard them as heroes. In the first place,no one is flawless.Ther...
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...rd them as heroes. In the first place,no one is flawless.Therefore,if every aspe...
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... In the first place,no one is flawless.Therefore,if every aspect of one’s life is expose...
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...first place,no one is flawless.Therefore,if every aspect of one’s life is exposed t...
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...fe is exposed to the public by the media,some of his or her behaviors might not be ac...
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... accepted as a moral standard of a hero.Besides,media may exaggerate a hero’s negative ...
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...ed as a moral standard of a hero.Besides,media may exaggerate a hero’s negative side i...
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...ve side in order to gain more publicity.For example,a brave doctor who is willing t...
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...order to gain more publicity.For example,a brave doctor who is willing to take the...
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...on to save others might commit adultery.If it revealed, his reputation would be de...
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...vealed, his reputation would be defamed.In such extreme cases,media scrutiny could...
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...n would be defamed.In such extreme cases,media scrutiny could focus on this crime,and ...
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...media scrutiny could focus on this crime,and bias public opinion towards him. Tha...
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...on this negative aspect. This assumption,however, could be wrong.With regard of first pa...
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...This assumption,however, could be wrong.With regard of first part, few heroes will c...
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...mmit crime or seriously breach morality.Besides, media may not be willing to waste time...
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...ps weak public resonance it can provoke.Media may choose to report the brave behavior...
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Suggestion: Most
...ake and praise him as a hero of society.Most of people are willing to hear the posit...
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...ake and praise him as a hero of society.Most of people are willing to hear the positive thing ...
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...he positive thing happen in the society.Therefore,the media which are inclined to report ...
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...ve thing happen in the society.Therefore,the media which are inclined to report posi...
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...ve aspect of a hero is revealed by media,it is still necessary for society to regar...
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... society to regard him or her as a hero.To understand this claim,we should revisit...
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...r her as a hero.To understand this claim,we should revisit the definition of hero.H...
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...e should revisit the definition of hero.Heroes are those who have particular qualities...
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...ar qualities which are admired by people,such as brave,self-sacrifice,and commitment ...
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...hich are admired by people,such as brave,self-sacrifice,and commitment to public interest. Ther...
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...commitment to public interest. Therefore,as long as those qualities are not proved ...
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... are not proved to be false by the media,heroes can exist despite of their negative asp...
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... exist despite of their negative aspect.Let’s return to aforementioned imaginary do...
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...turn to aforementioned imaginary doctor.If he indeed saves people’s live by sacrif...
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...ves people’s live by sacrificing his own ,it’s not surprising at all that he will ...
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...hat he will still be regarded as a hero.It is the contribution which he did that o...
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...im to the tile of hero. To summarize,it is true that media scrutiny has the pot...
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...tential to diminish a hero’s reputation.Since people are inherently imperfect,the med...
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...on.Since people are inherently imperfect,the media could deliberately focus on the n...
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...ould deliberately focus on the negative.However,the media may not necessarily do this,a...
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...liberately focus on the negative.However,the media may not necessarily do this,and t...
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...er,the media may not necessarily do this,and turn to praise their positive behaviour...
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...behaviour to attract people’s attention.Even if the media did so, the public would s...
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...e they have qualities that a hero need.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, for example, such as, in my opinion, it is true, in the first place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2410.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 448.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37946428571 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.67010989381 2.79657885939 131% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502232142857 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 785.7 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 23.0359550562 278% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.106037956 60.3974514979 230% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 344.285714286 118.986275619 289% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.0 23.4991977007 272% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.2857142857 5.21951772744 350% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 47.0 7.80617977528 602% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272922395406 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149173120008 0.0831039109588 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598485309925 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172135776122 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594328206417 0.0667264976115 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.9 14.1392134831 254% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.41 48.8420337079 -21% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 12.1743820225 251% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.79 8.38706741573 129% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 100.480337079 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 11.8971910112 273% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 11.2143820225 246% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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