Claim: It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Reason: The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Hero, which people relate to someone who sacrifices themselves to save others, or whom led the human civil to another brand-new level. The claim state that there is no more hero as such reputation cannot survived after the medias’ scrutinisation. I personally disagree with such assumption for several reasons.
At the first, the actual ‘hero’ usually not doing what they do for the purpose of winning such sounding reputation. For instance, during the Covid-19 pandemic, a lot of doctors were being called as hero, as they went to the front line even there knew they might get infected, not seeing their family for a long time and facing the fact they cannot save everyone. Although, they face the mental and physical exhaustion, lots of them still working at the front line to save as much life as they can. With or without the medias’ report, give or give not them the reputation as hero, these doctors will always chose to saved lives and cured patients.
Secondly, there is no absolute right and wrong just like human have weakness and merits. Even the media critique shortcomings of such person and expose the scandals that person was involved, it does not necessary diminish the person’s contribution to the society or even the whole human being. Thomas Edison, who invented the light-bulb that led human entering the another era of technology. Although he is arrogant and constantly trying to mar George Westinghouse’s alternative current system to promote his direct current system, his accomplishment cannot be ignored.
In conclusion, people usually win the name of hero for what they did rather than the other way around. Most of the time, their contribution weights more than their personality or personal life that being exposed by the media, therefore, the media scrutiny will not necessary demur hero, as it is defined by their achievements.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 607, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'choose'
Suggestion: choose
...tion as hero, these doctors will always chose to saved lives and cured patients. ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 58.6224719101 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 308.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10064935065 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68825483032 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594155844156 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4797423352 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.846153846 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 5.21951772744 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159895741294 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553877856024 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038901289197 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987649954816 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034213762452 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 607, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'choose'
Suggestion: choose
...tion as hero, these doctors will always chose to saved lives and cured patients. ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 58.6224719101 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 308.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10064935065 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68825483032 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594155844156 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4797423352 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.846153846 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 5.21951772744 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159895741294 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553877856024 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038901289197 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987649954816 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034213762452 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.