Claim: It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Reason: The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.
since, amid incendiary act commited by many living man or woman as hero. Many news broke out about their candor. Even though, many living HERO besieged in imbroglio, it would be myopic to come to adjucdication that odds to venerate living man or woman of society as HERO.
Media continously report about serval emgbroglio about eminent pesonality, who has accomplished pinnacle in their respective fiedl. In particular, once famous celebrity in from Bollywood,it is mumbail based hindi flim industry in india, Ram is consider one of finest actor in country, not only popular but also reverent as hero in India. TO all dismay, sudden news broke out in media about about his extra-material with his maid, actor is father two beautiful child, every member of society perplexed about news, how this can happen. Such esteem personality in coutry betray to his family and wife, and also those who consider his as role model . Moreover, people seem generally to reach consensus that it very hard to consider any livien man or woman as hero.
However, your will meagerly find people who never have heard the name of lionel Messi, he is not merely most illustrious and deference football palyer in world but greatest of all time as reagard by majority of people. Messi play for is former barcelona and current psg palyer, barcelonal and psg are football club from spain and france respestively, and also most renowned football club in world. In fact non-media reported about is collusion on and off the football pitch , even they espouse to follow the messi, never scarce of word of apperication about is quality , commitment to wrok, reslliance, quest to evolve and burgeon. He only livin legend to compare with many greats of football like of pele, maradona.
Therefore, it would be provincial to consdier that odds to find living man or woman in society as Hero, thouhg there are many collusion commited by once consider as hero in our society. Hero, legend are always in our society who always galvanize us to better in our life.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
since, amid incendiary act commited by many l...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: Much; Little
...ed by many living man or woman as hero. Many news broke out about their candor. Even...
^^^^
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
Suggestion: Much news; A good deal of news
...ed by many living man or woman as hero. Many news broke out about their candor. Even thou...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to adjucdication that odds to venerate living man or woman of society as HERO. ...
^^
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...HERO. Media continously report about serval emgbroglio about eminent pesonali...
^^
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrity'.
Suggestion: celebrity
...r respective fiedl. In particular, once famous celebrity in from Bollywood,it is mumbail based h...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... once famous celebrity in from Bollywood,it is mumbail based hindi flim industry in...
^^^
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
...ed hindi flim industry in india, Ram is consider one of finest actor in country, not onl...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the finest'.
Suggestion: of the finest
... industry in india, Ram is consider one of finest actor in country, not only popular but ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: about
... dismay, sudden news broke out in media about about his extra-material with his maid, actor...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'child' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'children'.
Suggestion: children
...his maid, actor is father two beautiful child, every member of society perplexed abou...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 646, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...lso those who consider his as role model . Moreover, people seem generally to reac...
^^
Line 3, column 763, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nsider any livien man or woman as hero. However, your will meagerly find people ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e name of lionel Messi, he is not merely most illustrious and deference football ...
^^
Line 4, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s and deference football palyer in world but greatest of all time as reagard by m...
^^
Line 4, column 477, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... collusion on and off the football pitch , even they espouse to follow the messi, ...
^^
Line 4, column 572, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...of word of apperication about is quality , commitment to wrok, reslliance, quest t...
^^
Line 6, column 123, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun collusion seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much collusion', 'a good deal of collusion'.
Suggestion: much collusion; a good deal of collusion
...an in society as Hero, thouhg there are many collusion commited by once consider as hero in ou...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 274, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ays galvanize us to better in our life.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, in fact, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 342.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93859649123 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56018666616 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581871345029 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8574895968 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.642857143 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194062361182 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707412368648 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693840751119 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129977034439 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661581477143 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
since, amid incendiary act commited by many l...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: Much; Little
...ed by many living man or woman as hero. Many news broke out about their candor. Even...
^^^^
Line 1, column 74, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
Suggestion: Much news; A good deal of news
...ed by many living man or woman as hero. Many news broke out about their candor. Even thou...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to adjucdication that odds to venerate living man or woman of society as HERO. ...
^^
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...HERO. Media continously report about serval emgbroglio about eminent pesonali...
^^
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrity'.
Suggestion: celebrity
...r respective fiedl. In particular, once famous celebrity in from Bollywood,it is mumbail based h...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... once famous celebrity in from Bollywood,it is mumbail based hindi flim industry in...
^^^
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
...ed hindi flim industry in india, Ram is consider one of finest actor in country, not onl...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the finest'.
Suggestion: of the finest
... industry in india, Ram is consider one of finest actor in country, not only popular but ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: about
... dismay, sudden news broke out in media about about his extra-material with his maid, actor...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'child' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'children'.
Suggestion: children
...his maid, actor is father two beautiful child, every member of society perplexed abou...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 646, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...lso those who consider his as role model . Moreover, people seem generally to reac...
^^
Line 3, column 763, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nsider any livien man or woman as hero. However, your will meagerly find people ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e name of lionel Messi, he is not merely most illustrious and deference football ...
^^
Line 4, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s and deference football palyer in world but greatest of all time as reagard by m...
^^
Line 4, column 477, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... collusion on and off the football pitch , even they espouse to follow the messi, ...
^^
Line 4, column 572, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...of word of apperication about is quality , commitment to wrok, reslliance, quest t...
^^
Line 6, column 123, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun collusion seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much collusion', 'a good deal of collusion'.
Suggestion: much collusion; a good deal of collusion
...an in society as Hero, thouhg there are many collusion commited by once consider as hero in ou...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 274, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ays galvanize us to better in our life.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, in fact, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1689.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 342.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93859649123 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56018666616 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581871345029 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8574895968 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.642857143 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.21951772744 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194062361182 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707412368648 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693840751119 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129977034439 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661581477143 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.