At first glance, media scrutiny of people may seem to diminish their reputation and expose the life. But, media investigation especially internet has made it easy to know a person passively and focus on them as a person rather than just a celebrity in any field. Media plays a prominent role in recognizing an individual and their achievements. On the present day, people are interested in the personal life of celebrates and they like to know them apart from what they do for a career. Media helps them to know famous people and also connect them. Often, the past of a reputed people and their background comes into lime light with the help of media.
There are many individuals in the field of business, film industry, politics, who are interested in sharing their personal life with public. These stories of past or present of the famous figures will help the common man know about their struggles and difficulties they have faced in life and how they dealt with it. This truth would often inspire an individual and increase fame or reputation of these celebrates rather than defaming them. Their struggles and personal experiences often stand as an example to many people. The history of these famous people would help common man know more about their beloved Celebrates. Many Famous people use social networking like Facebook to connect to people and share their life. Unlike olden days, the present world have the advantage to share their life over the internet which is done my many people.
Internet has played a huge role in bringing out the details of a reputed person. For example, there is a website known as Wikipedia which gives details about famous people like Evan Spiegel. He is an American Entrepreneur and co-founder of Snapchat which is an application to connect to people. The website gives the details about his background and including his achievements and how he became an Entrepreneur. It tells us about his education, his struggles as an individual and how he has inspired people to achieve their dreams. It increases the fame of the celebrate and helps people to recognize him. These lessons inspire people and increase the knowledge on a famous person. Wikipedia even hold information about many celebrates, politicians, social workers and so on.
Most Importantly, Some Famous people involve in serving the society by running different Organisations that help people in many aspects. For example, Blood banks which donate blood to people who met with accidents or anyone who is in need of blood. These organizations get attention through media and people donate blood after acknowledging them. This helps patients in bad times and might contribute to their good health. There are many other organizations that celebrates work for and do magnanimous donations which help to the betterment of society. Media scrutiny brings forward these aspects and their kind gestures earn them respect and they are also commended for their generous acts. With the help of media, even a common person has been recognized for his part of contribution to the society. For example, we see people who fight with burglars to save someone’s life. They receive accolades and attention through public media.
In short, media plays a massive role in recognizing a famous figures and display their life, different steps they take in life to progress. These lessons inspire common men and increase their fame and reputation. It also helps famous people to connect to public and share their aspects of life which is apparent these days. Individuals can learn good attributes from their ideal figures and become better people.
- In many countries very few young people read newspapers and follow the news on TV What do you think are the cause of this What solutions can you suggest 80
- People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting 50
- Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be 83
- Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. 79
- Zoos are sometimes seen as necessary but not poor alternatives to natural environment. Discuss some arguments for and /or against keeping animals in zoo. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 558, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... their dreams. It increases the fame of the celebrate and helps people to recognize him. Thes...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'apart from', 'for example', 'in short']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.265337423313 0.240241500013 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.147239263804 0.157235817809 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0935582822086 0.0880659088768 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0245398773006 0.0497285424764 49% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0736196319018 0.0444667217837 166% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.110429447853 0.12292977631 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0276073619632 0.0406280797675 68% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61567072342 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0306748466258 0.030933414821 99% => OK
Particles: 0.00153374233129 0.0016655270985 92% => OK
Determiners: 0.0828220858896 0.0997080785238 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00920245398773 0.0249443105267 37% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0245398773006 0.0148568991511 165% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3639.0 2732.02544248 133% => OK
No of words: 600.0 452.878318584 132% => OK
Chars per words: 6.065 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94923200384 4.58838876751 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.35 0.366273622748 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.256666666667 0.280924506359 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.168333333333 0.200843997647 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118333333333 0.132149295362 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61567072342 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 219.290929204 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.431666666667 0.48968727796 88% => OK
Word variations: 51.8419421731 55.4138127331 94% => OK
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6194690265 165% => OK
Sentence length: 17.6470588235 23.380412469 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9523971278 59.4972553346 47% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.029411765 141.124799967 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 23.380412469 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.264705882353 0.674092028746 39% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 43.3137254902 51.4728631049 84% => OK
Elegance: 1.64375 1.64882698954 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227522634657 0.391690518653 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.105040326185 0.123202303941 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.075720143938 0.077325440228 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.441993991752 0.547984918172 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0961370509755 0.149214159877 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836489996966 0.161403998019 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549436562505 0.0892212321368 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.422161805476 0.385218514788 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0686193288303 0.0692045440612 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1645033586 0.275328986314 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360953836052 0.0653680567796 55% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 26.0 10.4325221239 249% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 23.0 7.22455752212 318% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 28.0 13.5995575221 206% => OK
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It is not right on the topic. or is it the correct content for the topic?
Rates: ? out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: ? Out of 6
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