Claim: Knowing about the past cannot help people to make important decisions today.
Reason: The world today is significantly more complex than it was even in the relatively recent past.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
A person's decisions are based on their past experiences, one cannot remove or deny the past's influence in making present decisions. However, The prompt suggests that the past cannot help in making the current important decisions. I mostly disagree with the prompt for the following two reasons.
Firstly, Decision making is a subjective phenomenon. The person who is assessing the conclusion would look in a biased manner because of his past experiences in life. The mistakes that we have committed in the past and the learnings from them should be carried forward to make an informed and sound analysis. For Example, Dr. Thomas Alva Edison, the inventor of the electric bulb, failed in identifying the proper material for the filament many times. If he doesn't analyze the failure and does not identify the materials that are devoid of the properties as that of the metal, he wouldn't be able to reach the correct fit. Adding to this, If the Wright brothers haven't learned from their past failures with different flight models, they wouldn't have come up with the current working model of planes. Therefore, we need to take away lessons from our past in finding a viable solution for the present. Building upon past observations would result in an accurate and prudent decision.
Secondly, Certain things in the world will be changing at a slow pace, if not immutable, which often goes covert. Humans have an inbuilt mechanism that adapts our body and mind gradually to the changes around us. For Example, Climate change is a much-discussed topic for decades. Many environmentalists and activists have been verbose about it for a long-time. But, Climate change isn't a sudden phenomenon, it takes years or decades to observe changes in the temperatures. Also, art kept evolving with time but its overall essence remained almost similar over the years. Hence, we need not take impulsive decisions thinking of happening of swift speculative scenarios. Instead, we need to make gradual and long-term sustainable decisions by not giving too much weight to the complexity of the world.
Nevertheless, we might also have some scenarios where our previous memory doesn't hold a quantifiable significance. For Example, we know a little about the fields like quantum physics, artificial intelligence, etc.., if we try to fit them into the existing model of thought, we may not make fruitful progress in their adaptation. We should have fresh and futuristic thoughts in identifying the potential use cases of such new technologies. Finally, If we keep judging things with our past affinities, we tend to be opaque towards change and may end up taking erroneous decisions that could seriously impact our future.
To conclude, One can definitely not completely eliminate the influence of our past on our present decisions, be it positive or negative, but, stating that the influence is completely vitiating, is a debatable concept. The ever-changing convoluted world can't be a proper reason behind refuting the past's influence to make a present decision.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'decision'.
Suggestion: decision
A persons decisions are based on their past experiences, on...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
A persons decisions are based on their past experiences, one cannot remove or deny the pasts in...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a biased manner" with adverb for "biased"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... is assessing the conclusion would look in a biased manner because of his past experiences in life...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
... look in a biased manner because of his past experiences in life. The mistakes that we have comm...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...rial for the filament many times. If he doesnt analyze the failure and does not identi...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 581, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...the properties as that of the metal, he wouldnt be able to reach the correct fit. Addin...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 662, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
... Adding to this, If the Wright brothers havent learned from their past failures with d...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 737, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ures with different flight models, they wouldnt have come up with the current working m...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding changes'?
Suggestion: the surrounding changes
...t adapts our body and mind gradually to the changes around us. For Example, Climate change is a much-...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 349, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...ctivists have been verbose about it for a long-time. But, Climate change isnt a sudden phen...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...it for a long-time. But, Climate change isnt a sudden phenomenon, it takes years or ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ome scenarios where our previous memory doesnt hold a quantifiable significance. For E...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 213, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...um physics, artificial intelligence, etc.., if we try to fit them into the existin...
^^
Line 9, column 254, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ept. The ever-changing convoluted world cant be a proper reason behind refuting the ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2557.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 494.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17611336032 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8401386843 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 215.323595506 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 790.2 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3083916026 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.28 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.76 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14592939508 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447137987972 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481104908344 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918812531677 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045788308755 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 145.0 100.480337079 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'decision'.
Suggestion: decision
A persons decisions are based on their past experiences, on...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
A persons decisions are based on their past experiences, one cannot remove or deny the pasts in...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a biased manner" with adverb for "biased"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... is assessing the conclusion would look in a biased manner because of his past experiences in life...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
... look in a biased manner because of his past experiences in life. The mistakes that we have comm...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...rial for the filament many times. If he doesnt analyze the failure and does not identi...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 581, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...the properties as that of the metal, he wouldnt be able to reach the correct fit. Addin...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 662, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
... Adding to this, If the Wright brothers havent learned from their past failures with d...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 737, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ures with different flight models, they wouldnt have come up with the current working m...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding changes'?
Suggestion: the surrounding changes
...t adapts our body and mind gradually to the changes around us. For Example, Climate change is a much-...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 349, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...ctivists have been verbose about it for a long-time. But, Climate change isnt a sudden phen...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...it for a long-time. But, Climate change isnt a sudden phenomenon, it takes years or ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ome scenarios where our previous memory doesnt hold a quantifiable significance. For E...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 213, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...um physics, artificial intelligence, etc.., if we try to fit them into the existin...
^^
Line 9, column 254, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ept. The ever-changing convoluted world cant be a proper reason behind refuting the ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2557.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 494.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17611336032 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8401386843 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 215.323595506 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 790.2 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3083916026 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.28 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.76 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14592939508 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447137987972 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481104908344 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918812531677 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045788308755 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 145.0 100.480337079 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.