Claim: Major policy decisions should always be left to politicians and other government experts.
Reason: Politicians and other government experts are more informed and thus have better judgment and perspective than do members of the general public.
The author of the issue claims that significant decisions and political events should always be left to the government and experts. He further reasons that the government and experts are knowledgeable and experienced and are able to come up with impeccable decisions in any realm. Personally, I advocate the rationale behind both the claim and the reason.
To commence with, the government and politicians have always played a pivotal role in any given society since the dawn of civilization. In fact, there are as much as possible events and decisions in any nation and it is incumbent upon government and political members to address them vigorously and meticulously. Broadly speaking, politicians and the government are knowledgeable and experienced people who are adept at their work and are able to make sound decisions when it comes to trials and tribulations. As a tangible example, when a country is in crisis and is invaded by another country, politicians can easily and quickly solve the problem because of their knowledge. But if we take public opinions into consideration, no one will be able to predict the result due to the fact that people in the society are not cognizant of every positive and negative aspect of a decision. To elucidate more on this issue, although public opinion might be helpful, we cannot take them into consideration owing to the paucity of knowledge and suitable strategies.
Another equally salient point in corroboration my stance is the fact that although the government is knowledgeable, they should not neglect public opinion. If we take a minute to ponder over it, think of public opinions could enhance trustworthy throughout the society indirectly. As a matter of fact, the government and politicians are delegations of people who have been elected by their votes. So, the government should not behave in a way that people think they cannot play a key role in the society. Indeed, politicians should be careful about people's sentiment and act based on their own judgments. One of the startling facts that flabbergasted me is the fact that many people think their ideas are applicable without being critical of them. In this situation, a country might not be able to make a progress day in day out and the government should be informed of such situations.
As far as the reason is concerned, it should be pointed out that politicians and the government are experienced people and are familiar with various critical conditions. In fact, not only can they make subjective decisions in any situation but also can provide an opportunity for a nation to flourish and thrive at a very swift pace. If we assign important decisions to the public opinion, we will soon witness a lagging society owing to the fact that ordinary people are not skilled and they cannot take positive and negative consequences into account. However, it was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are more reasonable grounds that can lend weight to my personal stance.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, broadly speaking, in fact, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.6327345309 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.9520958084 139% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 11.1786427146 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 28.8173652695 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 55.5748502994 119% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 16.3942115768 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2544.0 2260.96107784 113% => OK
No of words: 504.0 441.139720559 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04761904762 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73813722054 4.56307096286 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91681243562 2.78398813304 105% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 204.123752495 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472222222222 0.468620217663 101% => OK
syllable_count: 813.6 705.55239521 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.70958083832 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7911555039 57.8364921388 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.142857143 119.503703932 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.324526521 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.70786347227 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.25449101796 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275892877789 0.218282227539 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895496090093 0.0743258471296 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620772966344 0.0701772020484 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159488626534 0.128457276422 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732317939696 0.0628817314937 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.3799401198 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.5979740519 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 98.500998004 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.