Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal
system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the
claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The prompts claim that we can usually learn much more from like-minded people whose views contradict our own because disagreement can cause tension, demotivation, and impede learning. The given topic is highly contentious because different people may have disparate positions and opinions on the topic. Some may go for the topic, while other can't argue with it at all. I agree and disagree with the topic that we can usually learn much more from people whose views we can share that those whose views contradict our own. There are three reasons and examples supporting my position are presented in the following paragraphs given below.
Firstly, Most of the people has relay on rules and regulations of that country. The rules and regulations are made according to the criminal, who has done which types of crime. For instance, the advancement of the different countries are based on their rule and regulations, also different country has their own rules and regulations, the country which belongs to Europe like German, Norway, Filipin, Russia, and so on, all of these countries are develop because people of those country proper follow rules and regulations of their societies and own country. if problems of that societies is not solve by rules and regulation, It can't developed. In effect, rules and regulations can be to solved problems in modern society.
Secondly, there is another example to support the given statement is development of Asian countries like Australia, America, and so on, if this countries can't better rules and regulations, it has never developed. Thus, rules and regulations give the shape of country.
However, There are many countries that can't be solve problems by the rules and regulations. Additionally, those countries which is not followed the rule and regulations, countries will start to destroy. For example, In the country Nepal, many politician is corrupted, they cannot followed the rule and regulations that country. furthermore country is not developed properly, If the politician and people people who can't follow the rules and regulations, the rules and regulation can't solve the problems of that country. Consequently, hard rules and regulations are need to make a better country.
In sum/conclusion, the reasons and examples presented to support the claim/position that both consonant and dissonant with the given statement. The essay highlights the many people of the modern society cannot be resolve by law and the legal system.
The exmples of develoment in Europe, Disaster of Nepal,and are presented to suuport the given essay.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 343, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... Some may go for the topic, while other cant argue with it at all. I agree and disag...
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Line 1, column 370, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
... while other cant argue with it at all. I agree and disagree with the topic that ...
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Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'developed'.
Suggestion: developed
..., and so on, all of these countries are develop because people of those country proper ...
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Line 3, column 560, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ons of their societies and own country. if problems of that societies is not solve...
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Line 3, column 597, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'solved'.
Suggestion: solved
...y. if problems of that societies is not solve by rules and regulation, It cant develo...
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Line 3, column 631, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...s not solve by rules and regulation, It cant developed. In effect, rules and regula...
^^^^
Line 3, column 657, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...egulation, It cant developed. In effect, rules and regulations can be to solved p...
^^
Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
..., America, and so on, if this countries cant better rules and regulations, it has n...
^^^^
Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erica, and so on, if this countries cant better rules and regulations, it has nev...
^^
Line 7, column 40, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... However, There are many countries that cant be solve problems by the rules and regu...
^^^^
Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun politician seems to be countable; consider using: 'many politicians'.
Suggestion: many politicians
...roy. For example, In the country Nepal, many politician is corrupted, they cannot followed th...
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Line 7, column 280, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...any politician is corrupted, they cannot followed the rule and regulations that c...
^^^
Line 7, column 331, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
... the rule and regulations that country. furthermore country is not developed properly, If t...
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Line 7, column 400, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: people
...veloped properly, If the politician and people people who cant follow the rules and regulatio...
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Line 7, column 418, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...If the politician and people people who cant follow the rules and regulations, the r...
^^^^
Line 7, column 482, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...d regulations, the rules and regulation cant solve the problems of that country. Con...
^^^^
Line 10, column 55, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: ,
... develoment in Europe, Disaster of Nepal,and are presented to suuport the given e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2181.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 412.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29368932039 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84009520557 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43932038835 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 676.8 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.4950872438 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.05 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166239380464 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645532949178 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727176633447 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966038090465 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106757828188 0.0667264976115 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.