Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Law means a body of rules and regulations in the form of judicial opinions or in the form of constitutions. Law is created to protect people from many evil things happening around them. So, effective laws are required to maintain stability and peace in the society.
The legal system is meant to control the bad behavior of the person which can harm the society. By creating strict laws, one can restrict these types of act which are very cruel. The strict laws should be formed by considering all the effects of crime on the society, for example for a minor crime the law can be liberal whereas for major crime the law should be strict enough such that the crime committer would never commit the crime again. Strict laws can create fear in the minds of people and cruel acts like terrorism can be avoided from the society.
However, Laws can put a limit on people's behavior but they cannot alter people's hear. There is no second thought that strict laws can sometimes put negative effects on the society.
Laws should be created keeping in mind the human's nature. The people should feel safe in the society by imposing strict laws against the wrong doers. But the laws should not harm the people's belief or freedom which results into disrespecting the laws. Hence, if people start disrespecting the laws than the real purpose of laws will be vanished. Instead, people will start abhorring the laws and even they will start protesting against it. For example, in India there is a system of reservation for those people who belong to a backward caste or those who are financially weak. This system of reservation is being opposed by many people since the law is being imposed. And due to imposing this law, many massive protest against the government is being witnessed.
However, in history we have many examples were laws had negative effects on the society. China has the world’s largest population. In order to control the population, Chinese government passed a law "one child policy" in 1970, stating a couple might have only one child. Chinese government thought this will slow down the rate of population. But, this law has also effected the country. Currently, the number of youths in China has decreased and the major population of China is the older age people. So the percentage of older peoples in China in comparison to younger generation is more.
Moreover, as the society is evolving day by day, various types of crime are committed. Previously when there were no computers and internet, no case of cyber-crime was witnessed. But in today's scenario a lots of cases of cyber-crime are burgeoning. So the laws always need to be changed or revised as the time goes on.
Laws should be created according to human nature. Laws are meant for the people so it is very important that the people respects the law. So, the authorities making the law always should keep the law keeping in mind the nature of human. The authorities should also create new laws in order to maintain stability in the society. In some cases the authorities should also modify the existing laws as the society evolves.
Hence, the authorities should create flexible laws in order to control the human nature or society. However, this laws can only control the human nature but it cannot alter their behavior.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 44, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...s should be created keeping in mind the humans nature. The people should feel safe in ...
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Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...doers. But the laws should not harm the peoples belief or freedom which results into di...
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Line 11, column 203, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...e was witnessed. But in todays scenario a lots of cases of cyber-crime are burgeoning....
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Line 15, column 110, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...l the human nature or society. However, this laws can only control the human nature ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'whereas', 'as for', 'for example', 'in some cases']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.261829652997 0.240241500013 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.168769716088 0.157235817809 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0694006309148 0.0880659088768 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0457413249211 0.0497285424764 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.01261829653 0.0444667217837 28% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.115141955836 0.12292977631 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0599369085174 0.0406280797675 148% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.49932481956 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0173501577287 0.030933414821 56% => OK
Particles: 0.00157728706625 0.0016655270985 95% => OK
Determiners: 0.119873817035 0.0997080785238 120% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0410094637224 0.0249443105267 164% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0110410094637 0.0148568991511 74% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3335.0 2732.02544248 122% => OK
No of words: 568.0 452.878318584 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.87147887324 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88187981987 4.58838876751 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.345070422535 0.366273622748 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.235915492958 0.280924506359 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.153169014085 0.200843997647 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0880281690141 0.132149295362 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49932481956 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 219.290929204 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.431338028169 0.48968727796 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.9400543609 55.4138127331 92% => OK
How many sentences: 35.0 20.6194690265 170% => OK
Sentence length: 16.2285714286 23.380412469 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0468629222 59.4972553346 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2857142857 141.124799967 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2285714286 23.380412469 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.342857142857 0.674092028746 51% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.94800884956 162% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 39.8201207243 51.4728631049 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.92361111111 1.64882698954 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391864231929 0.391690518653 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.152121468207 0.123202303941 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.102904433201 0.077325440228 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.543608437956 0.547984918172 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148942567554 0.149214159877 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141075145626 0.161403998019 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530874924248 0.0892212321368 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.316855488263 0.385218514788 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.101361133311 0.0692045440612 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231806030106 0.275328986314 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549590795752 0.0653680567796 84% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.30420353982 264% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88274336283 266% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 13.0 3.66592920354 355% => OK
Neutral topic words: 10.0 2.70907079646 369% => OK
Total topic words: 29.0 13.5995575221 213% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.