Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Laws are rules formulated by the constitution of any country to protect her citizens, to ensure the overall well being of all citizens, to protect individual rights
and to provide justice and promote fairness.Laws are not only restricted to condemning or restricting certain human activities but also encompass giving rights to people,
such as right to ownership, right to practice profession in all fairness and even targeted to protect the nation and environment that we are a part of. In short,
laws sets down the ground rules that we must abide by for our betterment. Many a times, laws are subjected to change depending on the need of the hour and the pressing circumstances of changing times
of present day society and in view of the best interest of the people it targets to protect. This being said, laws have limits.It cannot be exercised to tackle any problem
that we may encounter. Though I agree with the claim that many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system, I beg to differ with the reason cited
that it is because laws cannot change what is in people's heart or mind. Not always by being able to change or influence people's mentality can laws solve ongoing problems of society.
In the following examples, I will provide some examples to strengthen my view.
When talking about problems of modern society, we must talk about the problems of unemployment. Unemployment is not a problem that can be resolved by formulated certain laws
or reduced by the help of the legal system.This is a problem which is much deep rooted and owes its source due to a number of reasons such as over population, a nation's resources,
the economic depression that could have greatly led to the situation of massive unemployment. For example, the recession in IT in US back in 2008 was so bad that it not only led
to widespread loss of jobs and unemployment in the US but also impacted other countries like India where most of the jobs were outsourced from US. Thus, unemployment
can be the result of rippling effect of multiple factors and can affect people globally. It is beyond the scope of law or geal system alone to tackle this problem. It requires
proper evaluation of market situation by financial experts, economists of the nation and efforts from the government to somewhat tackle this problem of modern society.
Over population is another problem of modern society that leads to series of problems like pollution, scarcity of resources and unemployment. No law or government can explicitly
put a restriction on birth rates. First of all, giving birth is a matter of natural right where law cannot justifiably try to exercise any control. For example, until recently, for a couple of years, to
curtail the problem of overpopulation, the chinese government exercised tax for families having more than one kid.However,tha is the extent to which law can exercise its limits; not beyond that.
People do understand the problems of both unemployment and over population, however that understanding alone is not sufficient to tackle problems. Nationwide awareness campaigns with help from
government and others can help to control these problems to some extent. Thus, though people are willing to take care of these problems, law alone cannot solve them.
Another pressing problem of modern society is excessive environmental pollution and as well loss of ecological diversity.Now, in these two cases, many efforts by the
legal system have led to massive improvement. By enforcing strict laws, people are bound to change their mentality. Laws to prevent using CFCs in refrigerators,
regular monitoring of automobile exhaust, taking strict measures in ensuring water bodies are protected and wastes from factories are not dumped, we have been able to substantially reduce pollution.
By protecting endangered species like tigers and whales, laws have to some extent preserved ecological diversity but many a times, these problems are beyond the control of law. The recent fire at Amazon forest was a natural disaster that nolaw could have prevented.
Thus, in these examples we see that merely changing people's mind does not ensure success of law in solving modern society's problems because certain problems are inherently natural requiring conglomeration
of efforts in multiple directions and precautions to solve them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, then, thus, well, for example, in short, such as, talking about, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 120.0 58.6224719101 205% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3713.0 2235.4752809 166% => OK
No of words: 716.0 442.535393258 162% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18575418994 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.17283059074 4.55969084622 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84900419927 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 334.0 215.323595506 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466480446927 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1141.2 704.065955056 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.38483146067 319% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 98.8285901786 60.3974514979 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.807692308 118.986275619 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5384615385 23.4991977007 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.97078651685 503% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 5.13820224719 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343247470776 0.243740707755 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987708141504 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104633227003 0.0758088955206 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981870125746 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944372583468 0.0667264976115 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 180.0 100.480337079 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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