Surely, there has been no time in history where the lifes of people have changed more dramatically. People have to face lot of circumstances that comes along their way in life, which would certainly exact a toll even with the stringent guildelines and laws. Different situation demands to act in a different way, so it would be very erroneous to say laws would not change what is in people's minds and heart.
It is not obligatory for laws to act as a despotic regime in every possible way,sometimes it is made in order to protect people's life and to maintain the discipline in the society for the overall betterment of the society. In other words, reaction to action, and upbringing is one of the pivotal reasons for people to act in certain way which is understandable, but with the harsh laws even adamant people can change their perception for certain situation. For example, if we give liberty to people to go any extent during any kind of dispute then, death toll of people would be rampant. However, when we recommend for the certain type of laws to be addrresed then people would be more cognizant when doing any kind of mistakes.
Strict laws and development of the society always go hand in hand. With the modernization in the society there many culture and traditions that has been changed abreast with laws. This defiinitely proves that even for the modern problems we need to have certain rules and regulations to change people's befuddlement for the consequences they would face in future. For instance, even with the wide information about why child marriage is so wrong people would not have stop it if there were no life time imprisonment for the one's who do such acts.
Moreover, laws would not be prejudiced which eventually help us in making egalitarian society in coming decades as well. No matter who you are what your background is laws if you have done any misconduct then you would be punished according to the law.
To rebuttal, i completely discord with the claim as laws are very significant in order to maintain the discipline and to make people sensible about the consequences of the problem which would definitely solve half of the problem of society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...aws. Different situation demands to act in a different way, so it would be very erroneous to say l...
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Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , sometimes
... a despotic regime in every possible way,sometimes it is made in order to protect peoples ...
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Line 2, column 472, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n for certain situation. For example, if we give liberty to people to go any exte...
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Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun culture seems to be countable; consider using: 'many cultures'.
Suggestion: many cultures
... the modernization in the society there many culture and traditions that has been changed ab...
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Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...nt for the consequences they would face in future. For instance, even with the wide infor...
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Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'stopped'.
Suggestion: stopped
...riage is so wrong people would not have stop it if there were no life time imprisonm...
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Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...would not have stop it if there were no life time imprisonment for the ones who do such a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, for instance, kind of, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 378.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78042328042 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69483760473 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489417989418 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.857961516 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.071428571 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284776787598 0.243740707755 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110141039238 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570656331293 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178472924484 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433394661912 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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