When we are learning, especially when we want to make a deeper exploitions, there are always sounds , including both of agreements and disagreements. Of course people feel like to listen to the people who share the ideas with us ,that is human nature. While disagreement seem to be the obstacle which prevent us from making progress, as someone indicated that these opposite views will get them nervous. In my opinion, I want to help these people to get out of the nervousness and keep on learning.
Don't be shy, everything will be ok if you are condident enough.
To begin with, let's discuss why people will be nervous while somebody offer the opposite views. First of all, maybe they are lacking of confidence, which is based on concrete basic knowledge in the area which they were talking about. So here is the reason of the nervousness that cause stress and inhibit learning. What should they do? Just learn more and to be silent when you can not insist your idea firmly like astromoner copernious, who insisted on the theory until his death.Secondly, the peosonality makes them under pressure when people disagree with them. Too bad,maybe you think,while this is your life you must admit that you are lacking of conffidence. This is not the end of the world, and just be yourself. If you feel nervous, just leave away and make yourself comfatable when you are learning. Life is tough , do not be so tough on yourself given you are feeling not well in front of the people who do not agree with you.
Let them alone and fine the friends who agree with you.
What I address this point is that people are varied in personality, you can not let a slient coder to make compelling speech.On the othe hand, if you are confident engouh, do not live with the people who share with your ideas all the time, because this will make no progress in studying. In scientific area, when the paper issued by the researchers ,they are always very humble to address that they are welcome with anyone who can point out their flaws of the papers.From little research to significant event, they always do. Once the Pluto was the ninth biggets planet of Solar System, while there was someone who disagreed with this commmon sense decades ago.During these years ,astromoners used the new technology to calculate the mass and orbit of the Pluto again. Finally they obviate this once ninth biggest plant form the list of biggest plants of Solar System.Thus it will be more accurate when astromoners explore our outerspace.
In conclusion, we should take a proper view when people who agree of disagree with us when we are learning from them.As people varied in personalities, I believe one can just being himself is the best idea when to make the choice of which group he want to learn from.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, of course, talking about, first of all, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 28.0 11.3162921348 247% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 62.0 33.0505617978 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2299.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 485.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74020618557 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50614817703 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511340206186 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 700.2 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.7579038781 60.3974514979 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.95 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45 5.21951772744 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235936282636 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738592910288 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545737195803 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127369810011 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662167200696 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 48.8420337079 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.