Claim: When planning courses, educators should take into account the interests and suggestions of their students.
Reason: Students are more motivated to learn when they are interested in what they are studying.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Indeed, it is true that educators should take into account the interest and suggestions of students when planning courses. Such recommendations motivate student in order to study the subject that they mostly like or interest them. I mostly agree with the above claim providing the role of educators, when planning courses, they should take account the interest and enthusiasm of the students as students are highly motivated in order to learn the interest of their choice.
Firstly, no one is born with similar traits. Different child has different taste and different predilection towards different subject. Some children are fond of science fiction whereas some are fond of architecture. For instance- If a child is keen in interstellar objects and his mentor avoids his view regarding interstellar objects and forced him to study subject accordingly to the course they have in their curriculum. Such steps will demoralize the child completely and make him passive and disinterested in the subject rather than his interest one.
Secondly, some conservative parents put their burden to their children in order to achieve the aim they have planned already. Generally, these plans are those whom the parents fail to achieve or these plans include the process or step which creates lucrative career in order to make their life comfortable in the coming future. However, these parents do not know the prevailing condition such that one’s repute career might end in flop figure in the coming future. Thus, the parents encourage them to learn the interest of their own and compel educators to design the curriculum by taking into account and interest of their children.
Thirdly, the children are the future of tomorrow betterment or hopes. Different children have predilection towards different career. Some are interested in learning music and some are drawing. Some are afflicted towards innovation and novel ideas whereas some are fond of complex and historic theories. For example- Christion Ronaldo has a keen interest towards football from his childhood days. He has dream to be one of the best player of his decades and work hard to achieve his interest. By the end of time, he arises as one of the best player of football history. Similarly, Eminem has an interest in rap music and practice rap music in daily basic. He has achieved the title of one of the best rapper of 21st century through his perseverance in music. Thus, if their mentor has not supported them in order to build the career in favor of their interest, they may have ruin their career in different field with inactive interest.
However, some children are fond of subjects that create enthusiastic power in them ephemerally and vanishes with the passage of time. For instance- some children practice karate by copying from a movie character. After practicing of two three days, their enthusiasm dwindles away and change their focus on different topic. Thus, the educators by understanding the ability and intelligence of their children, they should design the program which causes interest in them in the long term basis and help them perusing the career of their interested subject.
In conclusion, in order to motivate students to learn the subject of their choice, the educators should plan the courses that interest them and motivates them in order to build the career on the subject that really interest them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 292, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as some are fond of complex and historic theories. For example- Christion Ronaldo...
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Line 4, column 405, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'dreamed', 'dreamt'.
Suggestion: dreamed; dreamt
...ootball from his childhood days. He has dream to be one of the best player of his dec...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d the title of one of the best rapper of 21st century through his perseverance in...
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Line 5, column 506, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to peruse' or 'peruse'.
Suggestion: to peruse; peruse
...em in the long term basis and help them perusing the career of their interested subject....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, firstly, however, if, may, really, regarding, second, secondly, similarly, so, third, thirdly, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 58.6224719101 142% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2843.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 554.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13176895307 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85151570047 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62873711752 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442238267148 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 877.5 704.065955056 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6073338957 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.296296296 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5185185185 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.74074074074 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326740636787 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931050247069 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124170549043 0.0758088955206 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207622308363 0.150359130593 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156771988286 0.0667264976115 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 100.480337079 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.