College and university education should be free for all students, fully financed by the government
The author thinks that the academic education should be free for all students by eliminating the tuition and allotting governmental support for this aim. I totally accept the idea provided by the author as I deem education as the base of development and cilcilization. In the following I provide three main reasons of mine for taking such position.
The education is a means to civilization for any society since it provides people with more reasoning abilities to solve their own problems and even to solve the society problems. An example of such situation is the lifestyle the one can see in the dormitories. I’ve seldom seen someone in the dormitory who breaks a rule yet people act quite civilized in the dormitory. As another example, in those locations where educated people work –even in hard workload situation– you can see the least conflicts between people. The source of such civilized activities is quite obvious: educated people think about their problem and manage it to minimize the stress and to maximize the comfort.
Another reason for me to take this position is the better outcomes for the society and hence better outcomes for the own people when they are educated. For instance, lots of Japanese companies moved their factories to china while their office is still located in Japan. What happens, the design and commerce parts are being done in their own country and as the reader may know, these parts use less people, but they have the most share of the income. On the other hand, the labor part belongs to china which needs lots of people and have less profit. To conclude, in this example the one can see that a society with educated people have more income for lower number of people and is more successful than the other one.
Let’s suppose that the government do not pay for this aim. Then, poor talented people cannot reveal their abilities and use it for the country’s prosperity. Furthermore, the justice is not done to society in which we try that all people have the same facilities to succeed. No need to mention that this way also prevents the poor people to improve their financial situation and eliminates any hope for the lower hand peoples. According to World Statistics Organization, hopeless people are more prone to perpetuating a crime. Another statistics provided by Asian Academic Agent proves that in those families which one of their children has been accepted in a free of charge academy, the probability of committing a crime reduced to one tenth in the first year after acceptance. The reason for that is reported to be hope for a better situation at least for the next generation of the family.
As lots of people cannot afford the tuitions and some other rich people do not pay for it while it is necessary for the society we live in, I think the government should allot budget for tuition fee of students. Although it charges the government, but I think it is an investment in its worst situation. Take into account that such decision decreases the safety prices of the government and it could reduce the budget government allot for safety. Therefore, it could improve the governmental budget even in the first steps of starting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, while, at least, for instance, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2672.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 546.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89377289377 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83390555256 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62050985078 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483516483516 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 855.9 704.065955056 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3674680619 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206350880569 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599883940422 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068189844071 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133575084861 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614739346961 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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