College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The statements states that schools and colleges should motivate their students to choose a field in which more jobs are available. The role of schools and colleges is to shape the future of their students, thus they should always give their students proper advice by which they can get better future. There are plenty of fields available for students to carry out their futher studies and make their carrier in it. But as the statement states, educational institutes should encourage students to choose only those fields in which jobs are easily available, might not always holds true. There are various others factors which need to looked before many any career decisions. Thus students should not solely choose their fields only by looking at job's perspective.
The various other factors like student’s interest, student’s skills, family background, financial status, also plays very important role while choosing field. For example, if student is not interested in computers but nowadays as computer engineers are having plenty of jobs if that student chooses computer engineering, then he might not become skilled coder and he might even find difficulties while coding. Thus, educational institutes should not solely encourage their students based on job availability.
Sometimes it may happen that trend changes due to technological innovations or social development, in that case number of jobs in particular fields are volatile. For example, in 19th and 20th century more focused on new discovery and inventions of new things, while in 21st century more efforts are put in automations and to decrease human labor by using computers ans smart devices. Thus it may happen that student chooses today student chooses computer engineering as it has plethora of jobs available but after completing his study maybe after 4-5 years the trend may change and there is no demand for new computer engineers, and as a result that student may find difficulty to get good job.
Furthermore, if all students only choose the fields having more job opportunities, then it is possible that only 5-10 major fields are chosen by students and as a result various other skills are hard to find. If this happens then it might hinder the growth of society because for proper development of society even minor skills are also required.
Thus, students should not choose their field by looking at job but they should choose field which can enhance their skills and help society to develop.
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- College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim In developing and supporting your position be sure to ad 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You should probably use 'state'.
Suggestion: state
The statements states that schools and colleges should motiva...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ble. The role of schools and colleges is to shape the future of their students, t...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ooked before many any career decisions. Thus students should not solely choose their...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...lays very important role while choosing field. For example, if student is not interes...
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Suggestion: Thus,
...r by using computers ans smart devices. Thus it may happen that student chooses toda...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...y looking at job but they should choose field which can enhance their skills and help...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, may, so, then, thus, while, for example, in particular, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2081.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 401.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18952618454 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57446967454 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488778054863 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3859439127 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.733333333 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7333333333 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262950164055 0.243740707755 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119090943772 0.0831039109588 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770793694505 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172847373241 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891538027078 0.0667264976115 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 14.1392134831 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.