The job is mostly became easier when we got our liked ones. As I person we all grow some passions towards profession, but with the time passing by our passion fade away, though some of them carry their passion in the academic field and some of them need to let it go. The prompt suggests that the college students should base their carrier depending upon the job availability of that certain field, which I mostly disagree for three reason.
At the very outset, job field is a unstable sector, a job is very lucrative today maybe become obsolete in future. Let’s take an example of nuclear power plant job, in 90’s when many different countries started making nuclear powerplant plant, that time nuclear plant engineering job became very demanding, they got very highly paid job, but after a decade when people started realizing the harm that the plant may cause followed by the incident in Chernobyl, many countries started banning the nuclear powerplant, even though it is not obsolete but the demands for the nuclear power plant engineer falls exponentially. So if a student chose there subject in a college according to the job market then there is a possibility that, that job market may collapse in next 5 years, as the job market is never a stable one.
Secondly, when you like the job you become more productive on that. For instance, take an example of great cricketer Mahindra Singh Dhoni, he become great in his field because he has the passion for what he does. If he did not play cricket and thinking like the rest about doing other job we may not hear the name of Mahindra Singh Dhoni. Similarly, if a student is good at painting but he is choosing Computer Science as the job market in computer science is comparatively higher then painting, then he might lose a chance to become a great artist. Moreover in future if that job become less demanding then he might not have that energy to go on with that, but if he follows his passion, in that case he might able to do something great.
There is no doubt that money is the ultimate measurement factor, it also may happen that the job field which is lucrative now will be lucrative tomorrow. For instance when the era of computer begin, the it started to become commercialize, since then the demand of computer science engineer is rising, now with the improvement of the technology it is even more demanding now. So if a student who has chosen his field of study looking at the job demands in market will be beneficial latter on when he will pass out from the college.
To sum up everything, there is no doubt that not every job field in unstable, there is a job field which student may choose and may be profited in future, but there is also some job field which is good today may not hold water tomorrow. So the college student may choose their field not only by looking at the job market but he should also look at other aspect too, like how much he like that work and what may the consequence happen in near future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
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Suggestion: in the future
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...f nuclear power plant job, in 90’s when many different countries started making nuclear powerp...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
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Message: “So if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, for instance, no doubt, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.3162921348 230% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2455.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 538.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56319702602 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81610080973 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39556179162 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442379182156 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 769.5 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.5582958735 60.3974514979 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.4375 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.625 23.4991977007 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215641653632 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875995264064 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770757497815 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134228754138 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555546013917 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.76 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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