College students should base their choice of
a field of study on the availability of jobs
in that field.
Write a response in which you discuss the
extent to which you agree or disagree with
the claim. In developing and supporting your
position, be sure to address the most
compelling reasons and/or examples that could
be used to challenge your position.
The author here wants to say that students
should choose the field in which there are
plenty of jobs,so that they dont remain
unemployed after the completion of the
courses as in present time the unemployment
ratio has increased drastically.Jobs are the
most important thing as it helps you get
settled in life.The statement made by author
cannot be supported here as if a student does
not have interest in a field how can he make
a future out of it,he wont be able to pursue
a successful career in that particular field
If a student will choose a field in which he
is not interested but would have plenty of
jobs he wont be able to study as does not
have interest in that particular field.If by
any chance he would complete his studies he
wont be able to pursue a job as he wontbe
dedicated to his job and wont be able to give
his best.Even if he gets a job he will be
facing a problem of excessive competition
around him and he has to perform his best
which he cannot as he does not have a
interest in that field and will be stucked in
between.
The author suggests to choose a field of
study in which there is job scope no job
availabilty would be permanent there would
always be a change in availabilty of jobs as
the time changes.Nowadays there are so many
new inventions going on that also further
creates a job so if choose a field that would
have job availabilty than it is not necessary
that the job would be still available.So you
cannot choose a field of study according to
the job availabilty, you should choose it
instead in your choice of field.
For exmaple if mark zukerburg, the ceo of facebook
would have thought that the computer science field
does not have a job and would choose a field of study
according to it we wont be using Facebook right now
,but instead he choose to go for a field in which he was
interested.so he work hard in the field of his expertise
and created the most successful social networking site.
So from this example it can be proved that chooseing a
field of your interest can not only create a job for yourself
but can create for others as well,but you need to work very
hard for it so that you can achieve the success.
So after discussing both the sides of the issue it can be
suggested that if you are good in any field try to work hard
in that field and pursue your goal by working hard.The
reason for choosing a field of study out of your interest
as it does not have a job could be wrong step as you are
cannot be sure that you can get a job in that field after the
studies as that job could not be available at that time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , so
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Suggestion: , he
...ield how can he make a future out of it,he wont be able to pursue a successful ca...
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Suggestion: If
... have interest in that particular field.If by any chance he would complete his st...
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Suggestion: Even
... job and wont be able to give his best.Even if he gets a job he will be facing a p...
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Suggestion: suggests choosing
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Suggestion: Nowadays
...vailabilty of jobs as the time changes.Nowadays there are so many new inventions going...
^^^^^^^^
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Message: Use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...b so if choose a field that would have job availabilty than it is not necessary t...
^^^
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
... that the job would be still available.So you cannot choose a field of study acc...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... thought that the computer science field does not have a job and would choose a f...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... it we wont be using Facebook right now ,but instead he choose to go for a field ...
^^
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'chooses'.
Suggestion: chooses
...ing Facebook right now ,but instead he choose to go for a field in which he was int...
^^^^^^
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t can not only create a job for yourself but can create for others as well,but yo...
^^^
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...self but can create for others as well,but you need to work very hard for it so ...
^^^^
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Suggestion:
...ng both the sides of the issue it can be suggested that if you are good in any fi...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ld and pursue your goal by working hard.The reason for choosing a field of study ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 27.0 12.4196629213 217% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 33.0505617978 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2210.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 493.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48275862069 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46402469502 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.369168356998 0.4932671777 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.9 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.59117977528 82% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 98.0 23.0359550562 425% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 289.079504635 60.3974514979 479% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 442.0 118.986275619 371% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 98.6 23.4991977007 420% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.21951772744 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 54.0 4.97078651685 1086% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235709677237 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156998022214 0.0831039109588 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500112483407 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0672255843403 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602600981211 0.0667264976115 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 49.0 14.1392134831 347% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.61 48.8420337079 -5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.0 12.1743820225 312% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.89 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 8.38706741573 126% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 11.8971910112 454% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 41.2 11.2143820225 367% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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