Some believe that teachers should be able to do what they teach, they should attend relevant activities outside the university to examine the results of their research in the academic world. I mostly disagree with this notion based on some reason which would be elaborated in this essay.
First of all, being a professor is a full time job. although there is not a rigid framework for university teachers, as there is for other clerks, the should work full time to meet their deadlines, teach and consult the students, through their courses and do research, as well as studying in order to keep up with the up to date advances of academic world in their professional field. therefore no more time might remain to assign to other activities outside the university.
Furthermore, teaching is a skill and professors have been learned to become a proficient teacher. Thus their destination is to teach students how to study and commit research and expand the boundaries of their profession as well. which is definitely different from what is passing through the business world and industry. So this would be more beneficial for society that they dedicate themselves to the science world.
Finally, although this is better for teachers to dedicate their time and energy to making advances in science and training professional work force for the society, they might not be able to do this perfectly if they are not aware of what is happening in the society. In order to improve something, we should know that thing well. therefore, professors might attend relevant communities and be familiar whit the real world.
in conclusion, this is a mission for the professors in academic environment to dedicate their time, energy and knowledge to boost students and make advances in the scientific fields. While they should also improve their knowledge of society and industry by participating in relevant activities outside the university, rather than limiting their knowledge to their small office or laboratory. Since their laboratory should be a sample of the real world.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... First of all, being a professor is a full time job. although there is not a rigid fram...
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Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
..., being a professor is a full time job. although there is not a rigid framework for univ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...re is for other clerks, the should work full time to meet their deadlines, teach and cons...
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Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...emic world in their professional field. therefore no more time might remain to assign to ...
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Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
...emic world in their professional field. therefore no more time might remain to assign to ...
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Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...learned to become a proficient teacher. Thus their destination is to teach students ...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...boundaries of their profession as well. which is definitely different from what is pa...
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Line 7, column 331, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...ething, we should know that thing well. therefore, professors might attend relevant commu...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...and be familiar whit the real world. in conclusion, this is a mission for the p...
^^
Line 9, column 393, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ge to their small office or laboratory. Since their laboratory should be a sample of ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 339.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12389380531 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72771251965 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486725663717 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.5505709177 60.3974514979 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.8 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 5.21951772744 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214593168293 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765643716966 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457133350472 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136548108257 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349284519316 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... First of all, being a professor is a full time job. although there is not a rigid fram...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
..., being a professor is a full time job. although there is not a rigid framework for univ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...re is for other clerks, the should work full time to meet their deadlines, teach and cons...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...emic world in their professional field. therefore no more time might remain to assign to ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
...emic world in their professional field. therefore no more time might remain to assign to ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...learned to become a proficient teacher. Thus their destination is to teach students ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...boundaries of their profession as well. which is definitely different from what is pa...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 331, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...ething, we should know that thing well. therefore, professors might attend relevant commu...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...and be familiar whit the real world. in conclusion, this is a mission for the p...
^^
Line 9, column 393, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ge to their small office or laboratory. Since their laboratory should be a sample of ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 339.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12389380531 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72771251965 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486725663717 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.5505709177 60.3974514979 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.8 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 5.21951772744 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214593168293 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765643716966 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457133350472 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136548108257 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349284519316 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.