Competition for high grades seriously limits the quality of learning at all levels of education Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In deve

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Competition for high grades seriously limits the quality of learning at all levels of education.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

The topic given discusses about how a nature of a parent should be.There is no steadfast rule on parenting.On one hand a parent can be strict and controlling ,always having a say in their children’s lives while on the other hand a parent can be like a friend who is easy to talk to and gives us more independence in our decisions. Although the notion of our parents being like our friends is very attractive as there is more transparency between a parent and a child,the camaraderie shared is greater but it comes with its own set of problems

Children who have been cosseted throughout their entire childhood have a very limited outlook on life. Moreover they do not have any limits to their behaviour.if a parent becomes more lenient towards their child,most probably the child becomes unruly and difficult to control. Thisis one of the main effects when parents are carefree and act like friends to their child. Secondly if this kind of behaviour is not restrained it can escalate into something bad .

Take the example of my friend Rachit.Rachit comes from a modern family that believes in giving the child the freedom he needs.His parents are very open minded and they just have one motto “do whatever you want to do but always do it with us”.this kind of leniency led to some unfavorable circumstances.Although they encouraged him to be more honest about himself,Rachit fell into some bad company and started being dishonest with his parents.His parents being more trusting in nature did not suspect a thing.Finally he was caught shoplifting and he was imprisoned.

I am not telling that this type of incident is always the case but if our parents always have a sense of what we are doing in our lives and they have certain restrictions and boundaries about what we can do we can live a more beneficial life as we are guided by our parent’s experience who have already gone through the same phase.Therefore I believe that a strict but loving control on our lives is necessary so that we never make any wrong decisions that can harm us in some way in the future.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, kind of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 362.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75690607735 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89229435991 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544198895028 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 23.0359550562 221% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 175.380286515 60.3974514979 290% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 246.0 118.986275619 207% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.7142857143 23.4991977007 220% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.2857142857 5.21951772744 274% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0295458489338 0.243740707755 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0135654483708 0.0831039109588 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0158876156946 0.0758088955206 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.019525795091 0.150359130593 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170234790362 0.0667264976115 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.8 14.1392134831 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 48.8420337079 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 12.1743820225 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.22 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 11.8971910112 231% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 11.2143820225 200% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.7820224719 187% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.

It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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