Art is vastly connected to the creativity, intuition, and emotion of an artist. People satiate their thirst for entertain get touched to the art. However, in today’s increasingly competitive world, people are busy with various sort of things, that sometimes encumber people to get touched with the art. But, that doesn’t mean all people are absent from the art. There won’t be any sort of painting, music, literature and other forms of art, whether there any people who don’t possess the interest to art.
To start off, art is a form of thing that helps a person to feel better, and let a person be acknowledged about the aesthetics of the nature that the very person if surrounded with. Additionally, there are replete of art pieces that confront a person with the past events. But, as I said earlier, we live in conspicuously competitive world, most of us are maintaining to sustain with this very complex world. Admittedly, a person has various jobs to do within a single day, therefore, has little amount of time to entertained his with the art. Consider, a sales man of a third world, who merely has to work more than 12 hours a day, hardly get any time to attend a painting exhibition. Moreover, he possesses a little interest to art, as his only concern is to income, and associate his family.
Besides, there is a another factor that inclines people to get touched with the art, and that is the meaning of the art. An ordinary person, who doesn’t attain any knowledge about the painting or literature, would have a poor cognizance to apprehend a meaning of a painting or literature. Besides, our education system rarely places adequate emphasis on art related subject to indoctrinate a student about the art. Only the handpicked students who choose to study art related subject, such as literary, fine arts, ad so forth, get to know about the actual meaning of art. On the other hand, students who are not related to those former mentioned subject, could barely sort out the hidden meaning of a art piece.
However, art should not be immured with a selective form, as creativity doesn’t burgeon under a narrow room. Creativity comes from freedom, creativity is related to emotion. A artist whether he is a musician, a painter, a poet, or a novelist, is admittedly contingent upon his own perception, intuition. Those factor act as appurtenant to create a new art piece. However, many can say art also depicts the past event, so to write a narrative on past event hardly needs any creativity. Those are clearly overlooking the writing skills, sentence structure, and so forth. Under the force a great art piece can hardly be attained.
In conclusion, contemporary art is not absent from peoples’s lives due to the reason: it is primarily created for the enjoyment of other artists but for the other factors that are quelling people to get attached. And, art can only burgeon when it is free from any sort of impediment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, third, as to, in conclusion, sort of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2471.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 505.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89306930693 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80654632673 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49900990099 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 779.4 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3677990932 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.84 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.12 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261331842449 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791577550076 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668592034066 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169804968138 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894043878201 0.0667264976115 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 100.480337079 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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