Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas in words, pictures, music or film in whichever way they want. I Wish the government shouldn’t impose restrictions on what they do to what extent do you agree or disagree with this option.
I would like to agree, with this point that creative artists should be given the freedom to express their ideas in the form of the pictures, music or film with their freedom. Here I am going to explain the pros and consequences of this issue.
The artists should be left on their own because they know how they can express their idea in the better way wether it can be film, music or picture. When the government impose some restrictions to not to perform it in a particular way then artist tries to do the same in the different way which can be differed from the original one. And also the government should not ban the particular artists based on their one particular issue which can be the picture, film and music because of the reason they performed something against the government.
The artists gain the ability to elaborating the issue in the form of some arts by practicing in several ways and these will the better ways to empower the people with the help of the pictures, music or films which can be better than the saying. This can be used as a powerful tool to help the people in so many issues or the tasks with which the people can be influenced in the positive or the negative ways. The artistic should need to take care that it can influence the individuals in the positive ways either making them angry or think negatively.
To conclude, I will agree with the opinion as the advantages outweigh the disadvantages the artists need be left with their own way of the creativity to create without imposing some restrictions against.
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- Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas in words pictures music or film in whichever way they want I Wish the government shouldn t impose restrictions on what they do to what extent do you agree or disagree with this 50
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 149, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ether it can be film, music or picture. When the government impose some restrictions...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 2235.4752809 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 278.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57194244604 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47781158088 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474820143885 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.4016200171 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.222222222 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8888888889 23.4991977007 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357248510041 0.243740707755 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160589000383 0.0831039109588 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10052975676 0.0758088955206 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231047271466 0.150359130593 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727528329752 0.0667264976115 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.82 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 100.480337079 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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