The following memorandum is from the business manager of Happy Pancake House restaurants.
"Recently, butter has been replaced by margarine in Happy Pancake House restaurants throughout the south-western United States. This change, however, has had little impact on our customers. In fact, only about 2 percent of customers have complained, indicating that an average of 98 people out of 100 are happy with the change. Furthermore, many servers have reported that a number of customers who ask for butter do not complain when they are given margarine instead. Clearly, either these customers do not distinguish butter from margarine or they use the term 'butter' to refer to either butter or margarine."
Write a response in which you discuss one or more alternative explanations that could rival the proposed explanation and explain how your explanation(s) can plausibly account for the facts presented in the argument.
The argument is about the memorandum is from the business manager of Happy Pancake House restaurants. Stating Recently, butter has been replaced by margarine in Happy Pancake House restaurants throughout the south-western United States.
While, This change however had little impact on customers. In fact, 98 people out of 100 are happy with the change. only about 2 percent of customers have complained, about the change. Furthermore, many servers have reported that a number of customers who ask for butter do not complain as they are given margarine instead. It clearly states, either these customers do not distinguish butter from margrine.
The company started this change first at the south-western United States to check customers acceptance rate of replacing margrine instead of butter and The results were remarkable as the 98 Percent of customers are happy with the change. The pancake restaurant however mentioned about the change they have done. This change also benefits the restaurant by giving more profits, while, satisfying the customers.
I think this change in future will takes place in the chain of the happy pancake restaurants through out the world. As the margrine is far more cheaper than butter leaving the company with huge profits and this change however not affected the taste.when margrine is drawn in comparison to butter, as it is made of vegetable oils this is also beneficial to customers health.
The author point of view towards this change is, As the change didn't affected the business of the restaurant as there is no difference between using butter ar margrine if the customers were happy.
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Comments
e-rater score report
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 264 350
No. of Characters: 1339 1500
No. of Different Words: 138 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.031 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.072 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.621 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 107 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 75 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.87 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.43 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.672 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.13 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Only
...e out of 100 are happy with the change. only about 2 percent of customers have compl...
^^^^
Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
...he south-western United States to check customers acceptance rate of replacing margrine i...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd The results were remarkable as the 98 Percent of customers are happy with the ...
^^
Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
.... I think this change in future will takes place in the chain of the happy pancake...
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Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: THROUGH_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
... chain of the happy pancake restaurants through out the world. As the margrine is far more ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 140, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'cheaper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: cheaper
...h out the world. As the margrine is far more cheaper than butter leaving the company with hu...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 64, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...w towards this change is, As the change didnt affected the business of the restaurant...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, while, i think, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.9520958084 8% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 11.1786427146 18% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 28.8173652695 49% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 55.5748502994 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 16.3942115768 18% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 2260.96107784 61% => OK
No of words: 263.0 441.139720559 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23954372624 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.56307096286 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67831792771 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 204.123752495 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524714828897 0.468620217663 112% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 705.55239521 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4413406947 57.8364921388 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 119.503703932 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 23.324526521 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 5.70786347227 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.469257495108 0.218282227539 215% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176780856777 0.0743258471296 238% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152723586592 0.0701772020484 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287536884643 0.128457276422 224% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.200541223225 0.0628817314937 319% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.3799401198 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.3550499002 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.5979740519 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 98.500998004 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 12.3882235529 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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