The graph below shows the reported number of cases of influenza in people over 65 in a certain village in the UK from 1985 to 1995.
The graph provides information about the number of Influenza affected affected people with an age over 65 from 1985 to 1995 In an village in uk.
overall, the rate of influenza affected people with age above 65 has increased by 25% in the past 10 years from 1985 to 1995 in an united Kingdom based village.
In the line graph decipted the x-axis gives information about the year and y-axis provides information about the number of affected population over the period of the 10 years.
The number of influenza cases increased slowly by 15% from 40 in the year 1985 and touched the mark of 55 in the year 1987. Then the number of cases decreased by 7% and had been at 48 in the year 1988, And the number of cases slowly sky rocketed by 32% and reached the mark of 75 in the year 1991. The trend changed with a sudden decrement if cases by 10% and the number fell to 60 in the year 1992. The number of cases without showing much variation maintained at 60 over the next one year till 1993. The graph showed a upward increment by 5% and decrement by 5% over the next two years, but the number of cases remained at 60 which was incremented by 20 when compared to 1985 in a certain village in united Kingdom.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: affected
...formation about the number of Influenza affected affected people with an age over 65 from 1985 to...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ith an age over 65 from 1985 to 1995 In an village in uk. overall, the rate of ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...om 1985 to 1995 In an village in uk. overall, the rate of influenza affected people ...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... the past 10 years from 1985 to 1995 in an united Kingdom based village. In the...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...at 60 over the next one year till 1993. The graph showed a upward increment by 5% a...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...xt one year till 1993. The graph showed a upward increment by 5% and decrement by...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33920704846 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30149124726 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453744493392 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.1449862027 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.125 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.375 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396534624475 0.215688989381 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179181404361 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098255113469 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236875278509 0.15604864568 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115248091203 0.0819641961636 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.9 61.2550243902 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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