Critical judgment of work in any given field has little value unless it comes from someone who is an expert in that field.
The definition of the work is very difficult to define and not universally constant . it has a broad sense of meaning and it is also varied from person to person. To some work is just a process to earn for living hood where as to some other it is related to satisfaction. but whatever the meaning is the acceptability of the work is important and it is a continuous process with proper feedback . A good feedback from an expert will surely enrich the work than from an novice. so I am completely agree with the given issue that the feedback or judgment has a value if it comes from an expert.
The work can not be properly understood if it is evaluated by some arbitrarily chosen person. only an expert of that field has the ability to understand the depth of that work and give their judgment accordingly. For example an expert software engineer can accurately calculate the efficiency of a software. user can also give their judgment. but the user's evaluation is surely different from the software expert. user can judge on the basis of how fast or slow the software is but expert will judge it against some standard parameter. Their judgment surely does matter as their valuable suggestion make the thing more efficient.
With no or little knowledge it is very easy to judge anything. but when we fit our self in that frame then only we will be able to understand that judgment of our work from anybody will have a very little value. An expert will understand our effort upon that work even if it is not a satisfactory or good work. then their suggestion can not only make that work as desired but also make more efficient and accepted.
However always expert opinion is not available and generally they came with a price. so all can not afford that feedback system to improve their work . In those cases it is better to listen what other say even if they are wrong then take decision which fits in that situation. Sometimes critics are just comparing our work with some superior counterpart so if we at least listen what they are saying then we will have a rough idea that what is accepted work to them and try to improve our work accordingly.
In conclusion there is nothing like good or bad work. Its definition is always changing depending upon expectation of the people. so it is good to take judgment from the experts as they are more experienced with certain knowledge that will help to enrich our work
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, so, then, as to, at least, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 433.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5935334873 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53449707163 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43648960739 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 637.2 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9504199582 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.875 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0416666667 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270466433604 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07998201404 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756699507223 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149678098492 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571843333493 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 14.1392134831 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.1639044944 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.