Differentiate between Commercial livestock rearing and Factory farming (100-200 words)
(i) Commercial livestock rearing is a traditional practice diverted from the Nomadic pastoralism whereas Factory farming is a modern practice initially started on capitalist intentions.
(ii) Commercial livestock rearing originated in Spain in around 1000 CE and slowly became popular in Europe, it had a cowboy tradition associated to it. Factory farming was started after industrial revolution when factory system became popular in USA around early 19th century.
(iii) In Commercial livestock rearing, the animals are kept in ranches which are generally large whereas animals were kept or rather stored in confined places like cage or small pens in the case of Factory farming.
(iv) Commercial livestock rearing is a specialised activity where only one type of animal is reared on a large scale. In factory farming, multiple animals particularly poultry and cattle are reared.
(v) Rearing of Horse is associated with Commercial livestock rearing however it is not with Factory farming.
(vi) The aim of both the practises is profit however, the extent is different. The factory farming is highly profit orientated, even at the extent to do animal exploitation whereas animal welfare is considered more or less in the case of Commercial livestock rearing.
(vii) Factory farming is a global practice which is done in most countries. However, there are specific locations like New Zealand, Australia, Argentina, Uruguay & USA in the case of Commercial livestock rearing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, whereas, in fact, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.4196629213 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 33.0505617978 12% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 228.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42543859649 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87896482014 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 215.323595506 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55701754386 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 704.065955056 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5468154397 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.454545455 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325280057013 0.243740707755 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132321396109 0.0831039109588 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704244030144 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175437134331 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516075449653 0.0667264976115 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 48.8420337079 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 12.1743820225 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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