educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study in which jobs are plentiful because education institute knows their student interest,strength and they can shape the student according to the field of job .
Country like india where student choose course just because they were told so persue that course because of peer pressure in this situation education institute plays a very vital role to encourage the student in the field of study which offers plentiful role because now a days where each and every day new technology is getting introduced creates lots of fields which offers good jobs and it is becoming hard for a student to be aware of every field . so institue should keep an eye of new areas of field for plentiful jobs.
every student have some personal interest in some particular field which many time they were not aware of and as student spends most of there time in the institution with the faculty its become there duty to encourage the student to persue particular field according to there interest also by doing so institute plays a very vital role not only for student but also for the developement of that particular field and thus development of nation.
When an Education institute fails to encourage their students to choose fields of study in which jobs are plentiful then they give birth to some very serious problems .
first that they increase competition in some particular field where jobs are few but the applicants are more .second it creates unemployement in particular field and some particular field lack of applicants .
third when applicants are more and jobs are less several employer decrease the salary thus creating a environment where people dont get the mental satisfaction and lives in a constant fear of getting fired now this leads to give birth to another issue of decline good health rate of employee.
Hence Education institute should give there full attention to encourage their students to choose fields of study in which jobs are plentiful and it is not that diffucult because nowadays everything is becoming digital thus technological advancement is at its pinnacle results giving birth to new areas of research which creates lots of new job opportunity for the student.
Thus Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study in which jobs are plentiful
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, then, third, thus, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2006.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 392.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11734693878 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69194288086 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.410714285714 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 23.0359550562 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.979852958 60.3974514979 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 222.888888889 118.986275619 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.5555555556 23.4991977007 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 5.21951772744 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 34.0 7.80617977528 436% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308926991803 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185375201507 0.0831039109588 223% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121792573606 0.0758088955206 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199709340671 0.150359130593 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123004210418 0.0667264976115 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.5 14.1392134831 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 48.8420337079 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 12.1743820225 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.8971910112 248% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 11.2143820225 171% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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