Although sometimes new consultant can give company some new ways to operate more efficiently but in most of the cases companies should spend more time in listening their employees.
Employees spend their most time inside the company and they knows the company issue better than anyone. many time issues which persist in the company are internal and employee who are facing those issue are the best one's to suggest a way to tackle those issue.
A recent example when Google faces accusation of sexual harassment on some employee then they listen their employee feedback on what to do and tackle the situation in a very efficient way which serve in all best interest.
Another example is of Apple when they were launching their mackintosh computer then the whole team of consultant had planned the whole operation but when Steve jobs hears one of the employee idea to create a transparent body for the computer. this idea tell us that how imp it is to listen our employee.
Many time an outside consultant bring ideas that are fresh and can bolster company growth on the other hand company employee's are the one who can give us the best inside of a problem.
Outside consultant has a very specific set of mind or rules which might fit for some companies or might not be. But an employee faces issues which are significantly small to be seen by an outside but are of value that it can overall cause a significant role in company growth.
Like company facing revenue loss because of the misuse of electric appliance when hire consultant can decide to cut the bonus because they might not know that what is the real cause but employee will be knowing this because he/she work in the company several hour on daily basis.
Thus we can deduce that its the type of issue/problem which company faces leads that whether a consultant can suggest a better way or not but an employee can always suggest better ways to operate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 61, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'know'
Suggestion: know
...r most time inside the company and they knows the company issue better than anyone. m...
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Line 2, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Many
...s the company issue better than anyone. many time issues which persist in the compan...
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Line 4, column 243, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...te a transparent body for the computer. this idea tell us that how imp it is to list...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many times'.
Suggestion: Many times
... how imp it is to listen our employee. Many time an outside consultant bring ideas that ...
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Line 6, column 150, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... But an employee faces issues which are significantly small to be seen by an out...
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Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...hat is the real cause but employee will be knowing this because he/she work in the company...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...e company several hour on daily basis. Thus we can deduce that its the type of issu...
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Line 8, column 25, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...n daily basis. Thus we can deduce that its the type of issue/problem which company...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, thus, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 336.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71428571429 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37671497933 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491071428571 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.932559929 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5454545455 23.4991977007 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360523719447 0.243740707755 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154014431974 0.0831039109588 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896043846626 0.0758088955206 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178127320888 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898740678037 0.0667264976115 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.1392134831 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 100.480337079 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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