Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers.
Careers can be a source for one's income or a medium to reach out out to the society as one may have chosen. Different carers represent different purpose and hence could be in sports, academics, business, ministry, health and so on. To purport that academic institutions should encourage their students to pursue lucrative careers is to provide a myopic view to life because what one considers lucrative today may not be economically viable tomorrow.
Before we look at the broader picture, let's even define the word "lucrative" as it applies to life. A lucrative career means different things to different people; some will state that it means any chosen field that yields the highest amount of income while others will argue that a lucrative career is proportional to the satisfaction and sense of fulfillment one derives from it. Regardless of the perception anyone maintains, we can state that it is not the job of an educational institution to define career viability for her students. For example, content writing, digital marketing, social media administration, data science, machine learning, artificial intelligence, etc. were never considered a career path let alone a viable one in the past two decades but today have risen to grow in demand experts in this field smile to the bank monthly.
Social media administration is currently not a course os study in the high school. This could be because no one ever had a premonition of it's emergence. If existing institutions were allowed to influence choice of fields of study, it is patent they won't allow their students take a risk on what is considered unknown. Yet, that ignominious career is one of the best fields with lucrative salaries today.
If we take a further look on artificial intelligence where machines are trained to take decision as much as humans do, it may not have been considered viable compared to the conventional medicine and surgery, engineering and law. Yet, Facebook as a company remains the leading social media company because it combines artificial intelligence to offer best form of experience to her millions of users.
Again, teachers bias due to the kind of careers that have been exposed from birth till date may be the factor for career choices on the student's behalf.
Regardless of the fact that early career path discovery can of inestimable value and educational institutions can play an important role in this, it will be deceitful for schools to engender this as the individual bias of the teacher and the changing trends of the society will not allow for tact choices as the case may be.
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- Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers. 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: out
...ce for ones income or a medium to reach out out to the society as one may have chosen. ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'mean'?
Suggestion: mean
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Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...ome will state that it means any chosen field that yields the highest amount of incom...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n the high school. This could be because no one ever had a premonition of its eme...
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Line 15, column 346, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'offer the best'.
Suggestion: offer the best
... it combines artificial intelligence to offer best form of experience to her millions of u...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, may, so, while, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2197.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08564814815 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91030961395 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537037037037 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 700.2 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1934561574 60.3974514979 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.3125 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192139908622 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587165734083 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588651955772 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953719619707 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676126527971 0.0667264976115 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.1392134831 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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