The effectiveness of a country's leaders is best measured by examining the well-being of that country's citizens.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The well-being of citizens of a country, no doubt, is inextricably linked with the responsiveness and effectiveness of its leaders, meaning that by analyzing the overall prosperity of a nation or state, one can conclude how effective the leaders of that country are. Therefore, I completely agree with the prompt that citizens’ development or prosperity is a parameter of defining leaders’ alacrity and effectiveness.
Undoubtedly, there are many examples of countries that have prominent leaders, while there is a paucity of flourish in those states. However, most of the time it is not the leaders who were responsible for that dearth of prosperity but the intrinsic nature of that state. For example, Bangladesh, a country that was emerged from a nine-month valiant war against the oppressor. The country had some great leaders at that time, but shortly after the independence, it lacks the necessary equipment and facilities to govern the country properly. As a result of that, it was going through a famine and the leaders were helpless. In this case, it would not be wise to make the leaders accountable for the depravity of the nation at that particular time, because after some years they managed to prosper and thanks to the great leader. Other than this particular case or these types of cases, a nation’s prosperity is on par with efficient leadership for a couple of reasons.
First of all, the leaders of a country resemble the navigators of a ship. Hence, it is their duty to determine the right course for their motherland. If the leaders choose wrong path, the citizens must suffer in the long run. Sometimes, imprudent leadership can bring disaster to the neighboring countries too. For example, Adolf Hitler, the German Chancellor unruly attacked neighboring Austria and that brought and world war which cost millions of lives from hundreds of countries all over the world. Shortly after the war, when Germany was defeated, the people of that country had to go through misery. The currency was devaluated to a level where one cannot buy a bottle of water with a million dollars in the pocket and there were no food, and no jobs in the country. As a result, all the people got impoverished and it is only for their precipitate leader.
Secondly, in stark contrast to the previous example, Sweden is one of the few countries that gathered riches despite the terrific economic downgrade caused by the world war. The leaders of the country chose not to join the war and they remained neutral by not supporting any of the conflicting groups. Not only that, but they also acted as a mediator between warring nations and their banks were open for all the countries, they were also engaged in trade and businesses with other countries. And there were no places other than Sweden where any country could cache their resources from being looted, and in return for this favor Sweden amassed an immense fortune that was eventually disbursed to the public. Therefore, the abundance of wealth appropriated by the people of Sweden actually the result of their prudent leaders and their effective measures in times of war.
To sum up, though it might not be good enough to consider the status of citizens of a country to measure the potentiality of its leaders’ efficiency when the country is newly born or becomes independent shortly, but in the long run, it is obviously the well-being of the citizens that reflect the effectiveness of their leaders.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to wrong'
Suggestion: to wrong
...their motherland. If the leaders choose wrong path, the citizens must suffer in the l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, no doubt, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 58.6224719101 142% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2888.0 2235.4752809 129% => OK
No of words: 581.0 442.535393258 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97074010327 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90957651803 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77117734313 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 215.323595506 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483648881239 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 894.6 704.065955056 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5628679754 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.565217391 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2608695652 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65217391304 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24902443486 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072831440008 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580052287851 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167455453068 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622856171136 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 100.480337079 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.8971910112 134% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.