This topic raises the controversial issue whether the effectiveness of a country's leader is best measured by examining the well-being of the country's citizens. Indisputably, that to be a outstanding leader there are multifarious factors that shape the effective one. Hence, I tottaly agree that the effective leaders is measured by the residents satisfaction. However, this essay will elaborate my reasons and examples clearly.
To begin with, to be a leader is not an easy task and he has to work and build up his identity in careful manner, and there are multifarious factors that shaping and structuring the effective leaders. On one hand, firstly, he has to have a savant communication skills to talk and negotiate with people to take astonish ideas and solutions for any task. In other words, by this trait he will increase his popularity and people will be satisfied because there is active communication and there is valuable person listened to their opinions .
Further, the second vital point that should be taken into account is that the sagacious leader who is able to listen to different point of views without bothering anyone. Then, he will be able to analyze their ideas by innovative thinking and flexible mind and apply the most applicable one, because it is hard to follow all the residents opinions even all of them are good, by this respectful way he will widen his horizon and people will be more reassure about their future.
Last but not least, the maximum resident's well-being done, when there is a leader has a clear plan, there is a future vision and mission and goal oriented. Further illustration, presences these crucial factors, people will feel more pleased because there is someone care about their future. Consequently, it is pretty obvious from the previous reasons, it is cardinal to have the leadership skills that will enhance the resident's satisfaction.
In conclusion, due to aforementioned reasons and examples, to get the resident's well-being state is not an easy task, and the leader has to build up a lot of skills such as active communication skills, good listening skills and conspicuous future plan.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, so, then, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 354.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0988700565 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84906427248 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531073446328 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2160786397 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.846153846 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2307692308 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 5.21951772744 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146391771284 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662860423274 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851034337837 0.0758088955206 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091020295534 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894020801831 0.0667264976115 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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