emergence of online "blogosphere"
Here,the main purpose of the argument is talking about emergence of the online "blogosphere" and social media.Yes i am completely agree with the statement that the emergenece of the online "blogosphere" and social media has significantly weakened the quality of political discourse in the United States.
In this century,techonology growing very increasingly.the best example for that is fast growing use of internet.People now a days using social media,twiter blogs,facebook,whatsapp,google,etc.Through internet services people can know the international news,activity,watching events helding all over the world in fraction of second.they donot need to wait for tomorrows publication.Few years back,when people doesnot know about internet,they are waiting for knowing the political opinions for particular topics,and cover the news.
The United States is fast growing country.People doesnot uses newspaper or any other publications after internet gives this much services very easily.Why they are using newspaper or any other magazines by carrying this,if they have internet.through which they can easiy get the news or watch recent activity held in other country by just few clicks and also they can use internet anywhere or any time.Online "blogosphere" and social media are very popular now a days in united state as well as in other country also.
Online "blogosphere" is very uses this days because it connects peoples.People post they own about certain topics.and also related person post their views regarding that.sharing information is one of the key to connects people all over the word.For example,for any film direct post their views or purpose or struggle for that movie they have done or doing pramotions appreciate or showing anger on some views or thoughts whithin a minutes or seconds.And before emerging this technology,they have only share their views only.so now a days public will chooses social media rather than using publications.they decline the publications.If they are using publication that they already knew the news before.So why they pay for buying such publications.
Though social media have advantange and disadvantage both.But it has more advantage over the disadvantages.For some people who is lazy to reading news paper but they are active in using internet services
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2022-07-24 | afroza2 | 83 | view |
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'regarding', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'talking about', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272277227723 0.240241500013 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.165841584158 0.157235817809 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0915841584158 0.0880659088768 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0594059405941 0.0497285424764 119% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0420792079208 0.0444667217837 95% => OK
Prepositions: 0.106435643564 0.12292977631 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0643564356436 0.0406280797675 158% => OK
Conjunctions: 4.25014028067 2.79330140395 152% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00742574257426 0.030933414821 24% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0940594059406 0.0997080785238 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00990099009901 0.0249443105267 40% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00990099009901 0.0148568991511 67% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2395.0 2732.02544248 88% => OK
No of words: 346.0 452.878318584 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.92196531792 6.0361032391 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.384393063584 0.366273622748 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.303468208092 0.280924506359 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.219653179191 0.200843997647 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.156069364162 0.132149295362 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.25014028067 2.79330140395 152% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 219.290929204 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554913294798 0.48968727796 113% => OK
Word variations: 60.9140395509 55.4138127331 110% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6194690265 24% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 69.2 23.380412469 296% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 190.249730617 59.4972553346 320% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 479.0 141.124799967 339% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.2 23.380412469 296% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 0.674092028746 297% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 50.0 5.21349557522 959% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 99.5468208092 51.4728631049 193% => OK
Elegance: 1.65740740741 1.64882698954 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192817849053 0.391690518653 49% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.253851810593 0.123202303941 206% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0520809404645 0.077325440228 67% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.547984918172 182% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 3.90949869403e-16 0.149214159877 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124704343946 0.161403998019 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138025752634 0.0892212321368 155% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.270356980383 0.385218514788 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0390732987854 0.0692045440612 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124704343946 0.275328986314 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.138025752634 0.0653680567796 211% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 13.5995575221 37% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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