Essay topics: “One should not expect respect for disregarding the opinions of others. Only when every point of view is taken into consideration should people take action in the world.”
humans are thinkable creature and our differentiation between right and wrong make us human. We meticulously consider different options and then we decide
the action we should take. In my opinion, every one should respect others opinion regarding their positions. To make a feasible conclusion, we must explore different
positions, and to buttress my opinion I will provide different points.
First of all, in a democratic country everyone has their opinion and should respect each other. If we do not respect each other opinions and consider as an act of opposition that may cause trouble
for an organization. For example, we choose our government by give the votes to a certain party, and that political party run by only one person. The leader consider him always right, but that might be an illusion.
By only considering everyone's opinions we can know fallacy of our view. If a person do not listen to others that might create an autocracy.
In the second point, in our continual life every business organization or a government body have a board of director. Because it may not be possible for one person to consider every point of view. For example, In our country, India government
has a team or make a round table before making a decisions. In other countries, like Switzerland they don't have a single government body. They choose five person representative of their country. If a decision have to make and four of them are agreed to an idea the fifth person
must opposed. That way we may know the void of an idea. There are some country, before making a decision they take a vote from common people. But, it is impossible for India to organized vote for every decisions because of our populations.
But people always express their ambiguity, that one person should make decision and that way it may be quicker. For example, in a war we need quick decisions. In that case it may be impractical to organize a round table. But, not
always single person make a decision. For example while making a war scheme we need a group of people and their co-ordinations to fulfill a plan.
So, in epilogue I must say that every one should respect others opinions and take actions after listening to everyone and consider every aspect. By doing that way we keep alive our democracy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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humans are thinkable creature and our differen...
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...le conclusion, we must explore different positions, and to buttress my opinion I ...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...inions we can know fallacy of our view. If a person do not listen to others that m...
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...xample, In our country, India government has a team or make a round table before ...
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Suggestion: a decision; decisions
...eam or make a round table before making a decisions. In other countries, like Switzerland t...
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... other countries, like Switzerland they dont have a single government body. They cho...
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...ical to organize a round table. But, not always single person make a decision. Fo...
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...g that way we keep alive our democracy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, regarding, second, so, then, while, for example, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 394.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84517766497 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70925385119 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477157360406 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 14.0 4.38483146067 319% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7686980558 60.3974514979 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.4230769231 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1538461538 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73076923077 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.97078651685 241% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.83258426966 290% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170569831556 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524876692279 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595748334287 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797353652914 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628125527331 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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