The idea of laws is created, to maintain the harmony in the society and not to discriminate among the people. The main idea is to treat every people equal without no biasedness. So it is the responsibility of the individual to obey the law, as it safeguards the society. But as the claim suggests that we need to obey the just law and disobey the unjust, so the 'just law' and unjust is very subjective. It depends upon the perception of an individual on that subject. However, I can't completely agree on the statement.
The scenario where the state runs by communist ideas, then laws are just considered by an individual. So, there might be some laws which violate the fundamental human rights. For the example: the law implemented by China, One or none: The citizen can give birth to at maximum to only one child. So this violates the human rights. Similarly, the law implemented by the Myanmar state where it discriminated the minority group which forced them to migrate. So in these scenarios, we aren't supposed to blindly follow the states' rule. We need to voice out.
However, all the laws don't violate the human rights. Recently Supreme court of India has taken the step to ban the sale of fireworks in India's capital before Diwali to maintain the air quality. So in the perspective of distributors or retailer this law would be unfair. But this law would be just, as it curbs the air pollution to a certain extent.Since the sense of righteousness is subjective, it is reasonable to accept the laws that benefit the society.
The Government of India has taken the step to banned the sale of beef. For the people who follow Hindu religion would consider as the fair step, because the cow is worshipped and considered as god. But this wouldn't be just law for the Muslims. But has India's majority population is Hindus, to maintain the harmony and benefit of society, it is reasonable to follow certain laws.
In the end, there are some scenarios where laws clearly oppose the human right, where people need to voice out. However the individual definition of right is often subjective, so in that cases, it is better to adhere the laws, as the laws are formed to protect the whole society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, similarly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 386.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72797927461 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64569677054 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479274611399 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9744273574 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.347826087 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7826086957 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4347826087 5.21951772744 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192285224017 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559990492116 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597011052827 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106625116819 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695002638258 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 14.1392134831 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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