In modern society, the people of the country are ruled by the laws which tell us what we should do and what we should not, while it is important for all of us to discern the laws given not all laws are fair to everyone given the laws are made by people in certain condition. While people could make mistakes, laws would be outdate,likewise. I will adress my views in points below.
To begin with, there are some laws outdated due to the development of our society. If the authority find the flaws immeditately, people will benefit from the modification of laws, on the other hands, there would be suffering for their people. As we all know the Uber evolved peoples' lifestyle of transportation, when introduced to China at first, people got more convenient service of Taxi with less cost.While because of the laws of regulating the online taxi service were not well-established, there was a serious competition between the taxi drivers and selfowners of vehicles in lots of cities in China. In this case, the local governments found the problem and revised related laws, which by the means of regulating the online taxi service market. Now almost every online-taixing driver has specific liscence to prove they can offer the new emerging service. This immeditate modification benefits both of the customers and drivers.
While there is another case populated in China which related to almost every family,that is the second-child policy, which seems to be late for Chinese.A few years ago, the one-child policy was resived for times which free some of Chinese especially ethnic groups, this limitation has banned most of people who want the second baby as well. China is stepping into the aging population society, that means youths will be much less than the olds in the coming future.Now the Government has found this issue and enact the second policy. Now in 2019 when we see the statistics of 2017 when this law passed, and 2018, there are not so many babies gave births as the authority predited. Because the people do not want a second baby or even just want to be DINK due to the doldrums of economy. Thus this modification of law came a little bit late to the Chinese.
However, there are still other issues of laws which unfair to people due to the people who made without practice. Here is another case in China related to the traffic lights. In 2011, the government revised the traffic law, in specific it make a rule as this, if drivers who drive across the corner with the yellow light, the driver violate the law and must be punishied. It iss ridiculous for all of us because we consider the yellow light is a warning sign which means you should stop while not the same as the red light. Later, the authority found this point and revised the law back to the previous one.
In conclusion, as citizen we should obey the just laws and do not obey the unjust one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, likewise, second, so, still, thus, well, while, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2382.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 505.0 442.535393258 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71683168317 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55539471564 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489108910891 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 750.6 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.2185518824 60.3974514979 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.1 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156075096196 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490478472201 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369971885362 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102112086774 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231648879957 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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