Without basical knowledege, we cannot talk about thoughts and spirits. As I concern, people couldn't make up ones' mind maturally unless cultivated by formal education, which is the basement of our spiritral mansions.Like a spaceship, there are millions components in it. Because humans can not fly to the moon by flapping wooden pads, we need this fine spacecraft which made from basic nails and so on. Likewise, the storage of formal knowledge is one's rocket in mind wherever the spirital area one can travell with.
First of all, people need to be cultivated by basical education if he want to survive in the modern world.Due to the rapid development of our society, more and more people conceive the importance of education as we are living in a world full of fast-changing technology than ever. Decades ago, computers are the scientific equipment for researhing, while they are everywhere today, even little kids can use iPad to learn English or play games. Without basical recognition, one could not order food in some restaurants with high-automation service system where one can palce order by clicking on screens on the table. I am not adressing the importance of learning simple calculation or language, as they are more fundmental , I believe it it essential for the young to learn programming, the important tool in the future.
Another reason it the basical education provide us the fundation of knowledge which the all the knowledge we are learning based on. It offer us a way of thinking. Without the basical education of physics, it is hard to know what is the theory of relativeness as what the scientist once called it the cloud of classical building of physics 100 years ago.However,if Einstein did not learn basic rules of it , he could not prove the famous theory.So it is the important frame of knowledgement for us that we can go on studying with.
On the other hand, the story of Eintein tells us, with the formal learing of the area, people can use the rule and develop new field like he did. We should not live only in the frame of knowledgement after we mastering them. Lots of discoveries and theories are out out the frames. The Pluto was the ninth planet of the solar system, while after the meticulous of calculation by astrmonoers, the Pluto was expeled from other eight big planets and it is more accurate for us to describe the solar system
In conclusion, I do not agree with the topic fundamentally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, likewise, so, while, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 417.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86570743405 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83060325866 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546762589928 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 643.5 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.188296851 60.3974514979 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.266666667 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.21951772744 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119330820803 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038394903415 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313961117391 0.0758088955206 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0700055066885 0.150359130593 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205302786879 0.0667264976115 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.