"The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company. "According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies actually increased during the past year. Clearly, the contents of these reviews are not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not with the quality of our movies but with the public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super Screen should therefore allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
As humans we have a natural tendency to be cooperate as well as competitive.Nowadays society only focuses on teaching the young people to be competitive and does not emphasize the importance of cooperation to become great leaders.
While being competitive is important in this fast growing world , society should also focus on instilling the young minds with a sense of cooperation .Thus schools and institutes focus on teaching young people the importance of cooperation from early ages.For example, sports teaches us leadership skills, values and teamwork , whether its is football , basketball or any other sport.
Another example is group tasks.Each group will have a leader who is responsible to drive the team to success .The team leader has to ensure that every team member support and cooperate with each other instead of fighting among themselves.This teaches them leadership skills and qualities.These skills can help them become a great leader regardless of the field they choose whether it is government,industry,or any other such field.
On the other hand , competition is necessary as well because without it encourages the two teams to give their best performance.Competition promotes a healthy growth to both teams and motivates them to be better.
Thus it can be concluded that instilling a sense of cooperation in young minds prepares them with the leadership skills and qualities , while competition sharpens their skills and grow simultaneously.
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- The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company According to a recent report from our marketing department during the past year fewer people attended Super Screen produced movies than in any ot 16
- The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company According to a recent report from our marketing department during the past year fewer people attended Super Screen produced movies than in any ot 50
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree 33
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...responsible to drive the team to success .The team leader has to ensure that every...
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...er instead of fighting among themselves.This teaches them leadership skills and qual...
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...es them leadership skills and qualities.These skills can help them become a great lea...
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Suggestion: Competition
...wo teams to give their best performance.Competition promotes a healthy growth to both teams...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ams and motivates them to be better. Thus it can be concluded that instilling a s...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...with the leadership skills and qualities , while competition sharpens their skills...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...their skills and grow simultaneously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, still, thus, well, while, as to, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 58.6224719101 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 227.0 442.535393258 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49779735683 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44968721117 2.79657885939 123% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577092511013 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 23.0359550562 195% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.4273820032 60.3974514979 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 249.6 118.986275619 210% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.4 23.4991977007 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.0 5.21951772744 326% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0289476675085 0.243740707755 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0154394865072 0.0831039109588 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0201398702948 0.0758088955206 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0154394865072 0.150359130593 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201398702948 0.0667264976115 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.2 14.1392134831 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 48.8420337079 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 12.1743820225 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.51 12.1639044944 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.8971910112 244% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 11.2143820225 178% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nowadays
... to be cooperate as well as competitive.Nowadays society only focuses on teaching the yo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... is important in this fast growing world , society should also focus on instilling...
^^
Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... young minds with a sense of cooperation .Thus schools and institutes focus on tea...
^^
Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...oung minds with a sense of cooperation .Thus schools and institutes focus on teachin...
^^^^
Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...portance of cooperation from early ages.For example, sports teaches us leadership s...
^^^
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s leadership skills, values and teamwork , whether its is football , basketball or...
^^
Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s and teamwork , whether its is football , basketball or any other sport. Anoth...
^^
Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Each
...port. Another example is group tasks.Each group will have a leader who is respons...
^^^^
Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...responsible to drive the team to success .The team leader has to ensure that every...
^^
Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...sponsible to drive the team to success .The team leader has to ensure that every te...
^^^
Line 5, column 239, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...er instead of fighting among themselves.This teaches them leadership skills and qual...
^^^^
Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: These
...es them leadership skills and qualities.These skills can help them become a great lea...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 398, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , industry
...eld they choose whether it is government,industry,or any other such field. On the othe...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y other such field. On the other hand , competition is necessary as well becaus...
^^
Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Competition
...wo teams to give their best performance.Competition promotes a healthy growth to both teams...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ams and motivates them to be better. Thus it can be concluded that instilling a s...
^^^^
Line 9, column 134, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...with the leadership skills and qualities , while competition sharpens their skills...
^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...their skills and grow simultaneously.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, still, thus, well, while, as to, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 58.6224719101 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 227.0 442.535393258 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49779735683 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44968721117 2.79657885939 123% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577092511013 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 23.0359550562 195% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.4273820032 60.3974514979 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 249.6 118.986275619 210% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.4 23.4991977007 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.0 5.21951772744 326% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0289476675085 0.243740707755 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0154394865072 0.0831039109588 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0201398702948 0.0758088955206 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0154394865072 0.150359130593 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201398702948 0.0667264976115 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.2 14.1392134831 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 48.8420337079 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 12.1743820225 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.51 12.1639044944 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.8971910112 244% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 11.2143820225 178% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.