Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
education is most important for every individual with which one can make new inventions. technology has been drastically changed from previous era to current era which is because of the education but the formal education which is still followed in various places tends to set boundaries to the minds and spirits of the students. There are even some educational institutions which have updated their trend with the current situation by providing the required support and freedom to the students.
To begin with, the tight packed schedule in formal education does not provide the enough time to the students to explore the present technology. The assignments, examinations lined up simultaneously restricts the pupils to the completion of them on time because of which the knowledge is acquired only from books.Furthermore, the teachers are also concerned only on the completion of syllabus but not on the student's creativity which restrains their minds only to academics.The pressure from the parents to get the high scores is also one of the major reasons.
To conclude, by changing the current trend of education by providing the required support , time to students to explore themselves and set their spirits free sky would be the limit for the inventions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Education
education is most important for every individual ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Technology
...with which one can make new inventions. technology has been drastically changed from previ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...e knowledge is acquired only from books.Furthermore, the teachers are also concerned only o...
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Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...e completion of syllabus but not on the students creativity which restrains their minds ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...restrains their minds only to academics.The pressure from the parents to get the hi...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cation by providing the required support , time to students to explore themselves ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, still, even so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 33.0505617978 15% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 2235.4752809 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 202.0 442.535393258 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27722772277 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98725320654 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 215.323595506 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534653465347 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 704.065955056 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.454901608 60.3974514979 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 177.666666667 118.986275619 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.6666666667 23.4991977007 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.21951772744 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203731346986 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105301831183 0.0831039109588 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407331007861 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134097120455 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537775572339 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 14.1392134831 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 48.8420337079 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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