The general welfare of a nation's people is a better indication of that nation's greatness than are the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists.
Any nation strives to ensure a minimum standard of living for its citizens, and providing opportunities for them to achieve their goals. If a section of the population is thriving, and the rest of the people are living hand-to-mouth then this is not a good sign for the country. A necessary condition for a nation to be great is if everyone, or nearly everyone, is able to enjoy a decent minimum in their lives. If one part of the population is thriving at the expense of another, then this is acme is only transitory. A system with huge divides between people cannot remain stable. So, a better parameter for gauging the greatness of a nation would be the average welfare of the nation’s people than the achievements of a small group of professions like rulers, artists, or scientists.
The task of qualifying achievements of people is a tough nut to crack. The absence of definitive standards makes it a matter of subjective opinion. A researcher could be churning out papers by the dozens. But if these papers get published in only journals with low impact factors, then that casts aspersions on the quality of the research being done. A lot of novel work with less potential, or very high potential work coming out of the labs only sporadically, who is to say which one is better? Anyone seeking to push a particular narrative can cherry-pick facts and arguments to suit their ends. The yardstick for greatness should definitely not be so vague and open to interpretation.
People living with an assured minimum standard of living with a support system would automatically have a greater number of opportunities to succeed in their respective fields. The converse, however, is not true. In developing countries, it is not uncommon for even excellent sportsmen to be living in highly underdeveloped areas. The only reason these sportsmen succeed is their own grit and tenacity. The system or the nation have little part to play in their achievements. Attributing their victories to the ‘greatness’ of the nation would thus, be highly unfair and grossly misleading.
The talented people in any profession would also weigh their options. It would be a matter of probability of likelihood for them. They know they are skilled, and would likely excel anywhere they find themselves. Would they still want to work in a country where they have only a small chance of leading a good life, when there are other countries that guarantee better resources, facilities and wellbeing? The answer is a patently obvious ‘No’. And thus a country that cannot ensure a good standard of living will gradually experience ‘brain-drain’, or the exodus of the skilled workforce, leading to the gradual decline in whatever perceived greatness the country had.
A nation could, however, capitalise on the achievements, inventions and their concomitant recognition, and take certain steps to ameliorate the situation. Technology plays a huge role in nation-building and raising the standard of living. The country could construct research parks and incentivize entrepreneurship to ensure that researchoutput increases, and the time-to-market of newer technologies is reduced. A wider reach of such technologies would usher in greater purchasing power, newer markets and foreign investments. Cumulatively, all this will set the country on the path of greatness. Thus, if the leadership of the country is proactive and takes initiatives, then the achievements in professions like arts and science, would certainly signal an up-and-coming great nation.
In conclusion, while achievements in certain professions could, under some conditions, lead to a great nation, a firmer standard for measuring greatness of a country is the average welfare of the people of the country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'Anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'seeks'.
Suggestion: seeks
...o is to say which one is better? Anyone seeking to push a particular narrative can cher...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, then, thus, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3170.0 2235.4752809 142% => OK
No of words: 607.0 442.535393258 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22240527183 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.96360453597 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15026312444 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 296.0 215.323595506 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487644151565 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 962.1 704.065955056 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 17.0 4.99550561798 340% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 11.0 1.77640449438 619% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.1052077101 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0625 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.96875 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.28125 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217141516741 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533902307008 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766470372356 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128974563789 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853981369674 0.0667264976115 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 162.0 100.480337079 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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