Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people whom they serve.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The style of government relying only on own judgment can lead to unacknowledge of problems and wills that important to other people in the country.
Nowadays there are several forms of government starting from autocratic monarchy to modern democracy where laws are carried out in different ways depending on the degree of population's involvement in the existing questions. It is an ambivalent issue that can be discussed from different points of view, but anyway, the final decision of the power should account for the people's interests.
In the case of despotic ruler that pursues exceptionally own wills, it is obvious that future public disagreements are inevitable. Furthermore, starting from virtual discusses they can result in forced events and lead to instability in the whole country. Civil wars are just the exact results of such kind of governing.
But often regular population do not know the real state of affair in their country or city, so they cannot even imagine the difficulties the government is facing. Consequently, if the power tries to please only the people whom they serve it can cause disbalance in relationships with the government of other countries, for instance.
I think, that people owning the power should have a set of numerous skills and traits. Among them, I can notice the ability to listen to people's demands and distresses. Eventually, combining the people's wills awareness with the existing possibilities will provide the nation's welfare in the long-term future. And, in the end, I suppose, this is the feature of a great ruler.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 138, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'people'.
Suggestion: people
..., I can notice the ability to listen to peoples demands and distresses. Eventually, com...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, consequently, furthermore, if, so, for instance, i suppose, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 255.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88076520229 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 704.065955056 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2627610023 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 5.21951772744 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187398142495 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060214850202 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429782171674 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10084496162 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363151909246 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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