“Governments are justified in circumventing civil laws when doing so is vital to the protection
of national security.”
From the prospectous point of view, the flourishing country is always in danger as no other country wants to see that country flourishment. It is the duty of the people who are living in that country that to protect their country from any harmful or jeopardy conditions. I appreciate the economy development of the United states. I think it is only the one country whose economy development is raising very fastly. All young individuals always gives the first preference to that country especially related to students or those who are seeking the job. There is something different in that particular nation which makes it very competitive and quality living.
In the modern era, as we see the the number of employers are more than the number of vacant seats in jobs. I would like to call this point and enlighten the bad aspects which a lower & middle-class economy people will face; this is only because of the system. Only that country will flourish which follows specific rules made by government. Moreover, the repertoire of people makes the government. For the purpose of protection of the national security, government are justified in circumventing the civil laws. I think this decission made by government is something really rational.
For example, top countries like USA, Europe, Japan etc. have their proper Apex level national securities and this is only because they do not want that other countries will dominate over them. The population is well educated and that's why employment ratio is also very high in these countries. These countries mostly focus in that how to bring their nation at the top position. In order to make that scenario, their government always had to made a control over civil laws. If there they circumvent the civil laws, the protection of the national security will get raise up automatically. But in order to make a control over their laws, the government always keep an eye in order to see that what are the various other impacts of this on the local people too. By making a control on anything is not so easy task. There are various pros and cons which will come into these type of situations.
I would probably suggest that to make a control over civil laws is something like that you had a control over supreme power. Isn't it?
At last, I want to say if all non-developed countries apply and follow these types of rules then they will also boost up their status. In future, India will also became one developing country. I want to callforth that the present scenario of that particular nation is not so good because the population is high and resources are small. If they make a control over this then definitely it will be one of the best developed country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...lation is high and resources are small. If they make a control over this then defi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, really, so, then, well, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2239.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 466.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80472103004 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60654726638 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467811158798 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 711.9 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1063795313 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1153846154 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107576708821 0.243740707755 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342894042518 0.0831039109588 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645302752304 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0620892839372 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384105740781 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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