Nowadays, the government is overseen by its nation and it makes the actions which the government takes to deal in certain situations more susceptible to critics. The statement purposes that the government can justify circumventing civil laws when applicable to national security. In the first glance, it can seem oppressor and it is when not reasonable, but there is a lot of situations to analyze before come up with a conclusion.
Firstly, the major interest of the government and its representatives is to protect the citizens of the country. For instance, at war there are several civil laws that are circumvented, like in the national borders that you are not allowed to have a free pass if your country is enemy of the other, communication that in some locations are prohibited because it can have phone tapping trying to catch information, which leads us to another example that is the privacy which can have breaches.
Unquestionably, these situations can happen without the status of war inside the land. In support of it, there is an example of terrorism. The government needs information to protect and avoid the entrance of terrorists and suspects in the country. In this case, it is only possible because the police and authorities use of the circumventing law effect to reach them. Due to this preventive action, police can capture these people before they commit any sort of tragic event. Hence all of these illustrations are for the benefit of the country, so it is reasonable and justified the use of it.
Moreover, there are some examples which do not include the security of a country but includes the security of the daily life. As evidence, an ambulance breaks the traffic law when they are carrying patients to the hospital, because minutes can save lives. Other case, is the right of police officers to carry guns which is not applicable to all but it is confront thieves and secure the order in case of lack of it.
Thus, with the examples above it is reasonable to justify the government intervention circumventing civil laws in special cases for a greater importance, which is the wealth of its citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 361.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94182825485 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88504919789 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498614958449 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.204119731 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.933333333 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268230980133 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896562687479 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106385225393 0.0758088955206 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145615111575 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819695337998 0.0667264976115 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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