Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Government is a body, formed by the people of a nation and is to and for the people of the nation. It is the sole responsibility of such a body solve the current problems and help the society to lead a good life rather than anticipating the problems that may or may not occur in the future. Society expects the government to be pragmatic and take salubrious decisions to solve the problems. On the other hand the government also has to pay its attentions to the future problems to some extent, so that its severity can be reduced to some extent.
When a body is formed in the legislature, the first and foremost thing the body has to make is to list the existing problems and discuss on those issues the way to solve them. For example in the country such as India, the prevailing problem is unemployment and poverty. Main reason for poverty is unemployment. If unemployment is eradicated, the poverty will also be abolished. This is the biggest black spot to the nation which makes the country still a "developing nation". The unemployment has to be eradicated by giving proper employment opportunities to all depending on their skill sets. Automatically if the unemployment is decreased, the poverty diminishes.
Further, the govern also has to concentration the current problems that are hampering the nation such as eradication of malnutrition. Malnutrition has to be eradicated. Most of the people in some countries such as Africa are suffering from malnutrition. It may have such a gruesome effect such that it may reduce the population if the same state continues. Proper measures has to be taken for this hampering issue. The government has to make some public funds for sectors like education, unemployment and agriculture sectors.
Public funds should be encouraged in all the above mentioned sectors instead of funding on the sectors like scientific research that may create large scale unemployment in the future.Although is much stress is laid on the current issues, public funds with respect to the energy crisis like fuel, natural gas and others has to be made. In this case proper measures has to be taken so that there is no dearth in the future. Alternate measures like bio-gas production should be encouraged, so that some of the natural energy is preserved for the future generations.
Thus in total, the government has to concentrate more on the issues that are currently hampering the nation rather than anticipating on the future problems. Yes, I agree that the future problems also has to have some attention but more stress on the pragmatic solutions pertaining to the current issues should be stressed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, still, thus, as to, for example, such as, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2208.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 442.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99547511312 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00575126255 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432126696833 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.9 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7630332848 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.363636364 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86363636364 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1714436929 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473945417009 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565212989011 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103613409383 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689931475209 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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