Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Art is and always has been a very integral part of our history and culture. Every age and time has been defined by its art almost as much as it is defined by its scientific discoveries. Hence since art is a crucial part of human existence, it is essential that the government invest in it as much as they do in the military. The military might be supremely important for the safety and security of the people of a nation, but art in its own way is deserves an equal share in importance and investment.
Primarily, art is extremely crucial for cultural development. Art helps in promoting and defining the culture of a society as it a form of creative expression. A lot of communities, tribes have their own unique definitive art. Several past ages are defined by their art like the renaissance era art, art post the french revolution etc. A lot of our history and past culture has only been known to us through the art created in those times, such as the art during the Mughal rule in India, or the art during the Napoleon rule. Hence. art is extremely important because people might die but art lives on. So it is a very crucial source of historical footprint. If art is not invested and promoted in todays times we will not be able to leave a impression on the future ages. Also if art is not invested in, various indigenous art forms and the culture of certain societies will be lost.
Art is also essential for creative development of the society as a whole. Art is what helps promote the development of the creative or the right side of the brain. Without art, we would be left with only scientific and critical thinking without any emotional expression. It is essential for the holistic development of a person. Art also helps in inducing cathartic relief and heals people in a certain way since its a form of expression of our unsaid feelings. A lot of depressed or anxiety ridden people have found solace in art. For example, often during stressful situations, simply painting or dancing have helped me calm down.
Promotion and investment in art is also required, since without it a lot of extremely talented artists would not be recognized or valued. Prodigies of art would not be identified nor be celebrated. For example, only because patrons kings and the wealthy have supported and promoted art a lot of famous artists and their works have been celebrated, such as Leonardo Da Vinci's famous Mona Lisa or Beethoven and Mozart's compositions. Without investment, the talent and skill of several prodigies would be ignored.
Therefore, art is what enriches our lives and makes it beautiful. It is what helps us lead a peaceful, and satisfied life. So it is vital that the government invests in it as much as they do in the military because it is food for the soul. Otherwise, the world will miss out on several artists and their scintillating pieces of work.
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2367.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 508.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6594488189 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70573784152 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446850393701 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 765.9 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6843391201 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5357142857 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.03571428571 5.21951772744 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149028065157 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501443482764 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446836982128 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0979586021458 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025445816694 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 100.480337079 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.